The best ideas arise from a passionate
interest in commonplace things.
In agreement with the statement, many great
inventions have come from individuals interested
in commonplace things. Out of simplicity arises
great ideas, and I would consider commonplace
things to be simplistic. However, it is hard to say
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that the “best” ideas arise from passion in
commonplace things, because one could argue
that the best ideas involve interest in remarkable
things, which is what makes them the “best” ideas.
If the statement is viewed from the standpoint
of all ideas from the beginning of civilization,
then the statement holds true. Examples of
commonplace things are food and shelter. If
a person had an abundance of food and needed
to transport it, they may have the idea to weave
a basket or make some sort of tote in order to
load more at once. With that idea, eventually
the people would think of things to make the
first idea more useful, such as adding wheels to
your carrying device. With shelter, first people
(Cro-Magnon)may have kept out of weather and
unsafe territory by using caves as shelter. From
passionate interest in the common shelter a person
may have come up with brilliant ideas about
structures, architecture, and construction.
In concern with the opposing view that the
best ideas arise from remarkable things, one could
argue that best ideas are medical breakthroughs
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and all other aspects of Science. Working with
substances and molecules and creating ions and
isotopes is not a commonplace thing. However,
it is what the people who make the scientific
breakthroughs have passionate interest in
expanding.
Looking at the big picture, I would say that
if people did not have “passionate interest in
commonplace things”, then the idea that led us to
the remarkable things would have never occurred.
If that is true then the statement holds true
because the best ideas do arise from a passionate
interest in commonplace things. Though some
older ideas may seem obsolete now, there was
a time that without those ideas, we would still
be in the dark ages.
Overall, I agree with the statement. The best
ideas do arise from a passionate interest in
commonplace things. Though I do not consider
medical breakthroughs coming from interest in
commonplace things, our species appears to be
reaching the point in which cancer and AIDS could
be considered a commonplace thing. If that is true,
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then when someone finds a cure for cancer or
AIDS it will be one of the best ideas arising from
a passionate interest in a commonplace thing.
Once again reinforcing the truth of the statement.
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...ble things would have never occurred. If that is true then the statement holds t...
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...nate interest in a commonplace thing. Once again reinforcing the truth of the stat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41217798595 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92487572625 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449648711944 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.831993398 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.55 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.35 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 54.0 4.97078651685 1086% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4352998266 0.243740707755 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160702829025 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163120973179 0.0758088955206 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984338433733 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122265657123 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.