Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who can not afford the tuition.
The education should be offer to every one without any barrier of fee, it's government responsibility to give education to every body. it's not only help us to grow the society but also to grow as nation. I think educational cost will give government highest return and it's best for any nation as investment.
The nation who offered education for free of cost is one of richest country in the world now. As government spent on education, everyone in country are able to serve nation in better way. it help us not only to increase per capita income but also help to innovate new things. let me give example of one of the best education system in the world, which is finaland's educational system. it's perfect epidome for nation who want to give free education. Finland's percapita income is much higher, as compare to the nation who offer paid education system. Not just that finaland is one leading country in term of innovation. so that it will increase the soft power of nation as well.
By considering expense, initially as nation it will cost in eraly phase, but sonner it will paid by citizens of nation who get job after accomplishment of free education. And having such great citizens is help full for increasing GDP of the nation. many mnc like to open office in the country, who has educated citizens. let me give example of my own counrty, which is india. Nowadays many mnc like to open there office in india due to easy to get intalligent people. so free education is one of best investment for any natio, which give enormouse amount of return not from single source but from multiple source.
In conclusion:The government has many responsiblity but education should be always priority to achive growth like developed country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81125827815 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63652065678 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493377483444 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3573587953 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7222222222 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196066520932 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676689965546 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653213737483 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127053894715 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266039689119 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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