All colleges and universities students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country
there are many factors on which the growth of a college student depends: The proper infrastructure, quality of the surrounding students, quality of the teachers etc. While, In a developed country like The United States where there are a myriad of colleges that provide students with proper facilities, the students might not need to spend any time in foreign countries. but, developing countries like india, in contrast, lack the cutting edge technology, tools and infrastructures which can be made use of by the students. Allowing students to spend one semester in foreign countries might help them in understanding their field better and in-process, helping them in becoming better in their field of study.
To provide an evidence to my argument, I’ll take the example of Sundar Pichai, who has made his name as the CEO of one of the most innovative companies of the world. Had he not gone to stanford for further studies would he have been able to reach such heights? it’s highly doubtful. When he got to study in prestigious university like stanford, he was able to fully realise his potential.
one more advantage of spending time learning in foreign countries is that students get to interact with many students from varied countries of origin. this helps the student in gaining various points of view on topics and also helps them to build a comprehensive network. networking is a very useful skill for a college student that helps him to thrive in this demanding world. In addition, getting the knowledge of various cultures helps in the student’s overall development.
but, as not color is completely black or white, there are some factors that can act against the argument and should be taken into account before making any decision. one of the major factors is the economic background of the student. As in developing countries such as india, the students are dependent on their families for financial support. making spending a semester in foreign country mandatory might put unnecessary burden on the families of such students and in turn, forcing students to depend on the student loans which is an additional burden on college going students.
To conclude, encouraging students to spend a semester in a foreign country will be a welcome step which will help in the growth of the students. but, it should not be made mandatory as it might put an additional financial burden on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15461346633 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78757039205 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491271820449 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6739989616 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310989922973 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931554222777 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082162909772 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166225290642 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509638348999 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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