all the students should receive the same national curriculum untill they enter college
Right to education is dignified as one the basic human right in today's world. I would like to agree to the arguement on a common national curriculum till higher secondary. A generalized curriculum also supports the right to equality and help in nurturing all the young talents commonly. This will enhance the abilities of the individuals to the same level, which cannot be observed in today's era due to high amount of private institutions degrading the practise of common education policy and considering education as a source of income and profit. Kota, a place in India also known as educational hub of India consists of dozens of private institutes and campuses training individuals to achieve high score in competetive examinations. Admission in these educational organizations is highly demanding irrespective of their high fees.
However, government is needed to introduce strict policies against these practises and tend to improve the quality of education in government scools by employing professional graduates. Now a days, a collegiate of a renowned national university is more eccentric towards private and well-paid jobs than to join an educational institution as a lecturer, due to lack of opportunity and motivation.
Hence, it should be in practise that all the students should receive the same national curriculum untill they enter college. In my opinion, every student over the globe should receive a common knowledge irrespective of regional and language barriers as language is not meant to be a barrier in case of sharing knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, second, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32520325203 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08584515917 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589430894309 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0638441717 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245183443666 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106146960605 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200902645034 0.0758088955206 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183005482002 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192813831851 0.0667264976115 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.8420337079 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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