Teacher's salaries should be paid on according the students performance.

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Teacher's salaries should be paid on according the students performance.

Value of a teacher is exhibited by his student's performance rather than his years of experience. Several private schools believes this quote to be fruitful. It has been observed that institutions are awarding their employees with a bonus, decided on the basis of academic performance of the class. these policies encouraged teachers to stay dedicated and develop strategic planning for their courses, and increased their interaction with individuals. Articles published on newspapers have also reported that these new rules have received a highly positive response from the students as well as parents.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...s of academic performance of the class. these policies encouraged teachers to stay de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 58.6224719101 20% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 511.0 2235.4752809 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 92.0 442.535393258 21% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55434782609 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.09704101468 4.55969084622 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90937065671 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 215.323595506 33% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.782608695652 0.4932671777 159% => OK
syllable_count: 161.1 704.065955056 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5546166715 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101597432231 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492414283331 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338040750673 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101597432231 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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