In the given Issue prompt, the author is primarily concerned with most companies wasting their resources on hiring third-party consultants to increase their efficiency rather than relying on employee feedback. All companies are different. Their focus, principles and the purview towards their employees vary vastly. So, one cannot aver what should be the best way for companies to increase their productivity, however, there might be some criteria that may provide a keen insight into whether a company requires external advisors or not.
There are basically two types of companies. One which focus on the profits others who focus on productivity of their employees. “Profit”-focused companies are most likely to hire outside consultants. This is because the feedback provided by the employees may be biased. They would try to blame others for the decrease in profits and never admit their own mistakes or incapability. Moreover, if the owner of the company is not satisfied with the company’s performance even though its employees are putting everything into it, the last thing that the company requires isn’t some feedback from its underperforming employees rather some fresh insight from a new set of unbiased eyes.
The other type of company values the welfare of its employees and believes that to increase its efficiency, the productivity of its employees should be increased. An outside person will not have the first-hand experience of what goes on inside the company and why it is underperforming. The employees of the company on the other hand would actually know what is being done wrong and may provide the accurate description of the problem and its solution that is creating a hindrance for increasing efficiency of the company’s operations.
One needs to understand that no two companies are the same. They have different work ethics, work cultures and employees. What may work for one company may not work for the other. Employees’ reviews can be biased and may ultimately do more harm than good for the company. On the other hand, outside consultants hired may not have a keen insight into what is actually going on in the company. No single method is the best one. It is best left for the company to decide who is providing the best advice or does the best answer lie somewhere between the two. These are just some specific isolated instances of what the criterion might be. The best answer may lie completely aloof to what has been stated in this essay. In conclusion, the company is the best judge and it must objectively listen to both the sides (employees and outside advisors) and pursue a path that is rational and the most apt in the given situation.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'third', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221115537849 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.161354581673 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0856573705179 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498007968127 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0378486055777 0.0444667217837 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101593625498 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0458167330677 0.0406280797675 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98416813148 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0179282868526 0.030933414821 58% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.121513944223 0.0997080785238 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0358565737052 0.0249443105267 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0258964143426 0.0148568991511 174% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2713.0 2732.02544248 99% => OK
No of words: 445.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09662921348 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34606741573 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285393258427 0.280924506359 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206741573034 0.200843997647 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141573033708 0.132149295362 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98416813148 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485393258427 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 54.4402756989 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.347826087 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3910725321 59.4972553346 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.956521739 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.347826087 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.434782608696 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 47.8871519297 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.48 1.64882698954 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27328792542 0.391690518653 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107880299354 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110896428092 0.077325440228 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481377900981 0.547984918172 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186958238947 0.149214159877 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108408531266 0.161403998019 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536289769105 0.0892212321368 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.510944697811 0.385218514788 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0773833984679 0.0692045440612 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213767252804 0.275328986314 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477903519232 0.0653680567796 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.