All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Consultancy is a growing trend in 21st century in every possible field from education to license, visas till companies. There may hardly any field be left, where we dont find consulting services. Basically, consultants come across as smartest and experienced individuals who have had years of experience and have developed an expertise. I believe that an assistance or a guide or a mentor can help an individual reach their goal not definitely but certainly. I stand affirmative that taking an form or help or guidance to reach your end goal or be successful isn't a crime. However, as mentioned by the author that companies hire consultants for efficient working of the company but do not spend time listening employees, as it doesn't carry matter much for the growth of the company is undoubtely a true scenario.
A company is made up or made by the the founders and the employees as well. Employees equally have a share for company's success or failure. It is not merely 'take service-give employment'relation. As the company grows, the people on the board certainly have plans to expand and grow and wish for the best and they approach or hire consultants. There is no doubt that consultants bring on their expertise, vision and experience to the table. In all these discussions and planning, employees are often neglected. Their views, opinions suggestions are never asked. Which is where I believe the company fall back.
It is important to understand, that consultants only have suggestions to give, ideas to be discussed, but they are the employees who work on it, execute it and make it possible. The higher authorities should make sure that the employees are heard, taken into considerations. Whether it is an issue or a complaint or an idea equal importance and respect should be given, only then we see the difference in the potential of company's growth.
In order to conclude, I would bolster that emphasis is given to employees feedback.There can be various ways, like conducting polls, sending out forms collecting their views, feedbacks and suggestions as anonymous. Not only does display their point of view but also this increase interaction between employees and boss at every level.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... may hardly any field be left, where we dont find consulting services. Basically, co...
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Line 1, column 492, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tainly. I stand affirmative that taking an form or help or guidance to reach your ...
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Line 1, column 560, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...to reach your end goal or be successful isnt a crime. However, as mentioned by the a...
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Line 1, column 728, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t spend time listening employees, as it doesnt carry matter much for the growth of the...
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Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...nario. A company is made up or made by the the founders and the employees as well. Emp...
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Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...nario. A company is made up or made by the the founders and the employees as well. Emp...
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Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., opinions suggestions are never asked. Which is where I believe the company fall bac...
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Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...emphasis is given to employees feedback.There can be various ways, like conducting po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, as to, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03561643836 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98898961572 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.454721047 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7368421053 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332366552227 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891413613814 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748897754892 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182558768945 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786814566254 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... may hardly any field be left, where we dont find consulting services. Basically, co...
^^^^
Line 1, column 492, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tainly. I stand affirmative that taking an form or help or guidance to reach your ...
^^
Line 1, column 560, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...to reach your end goal or be successful isnt a crime. However, as mentioned by the a...
^^^^
Line 1, column 728, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t spend time listening employees, as it doesnt carry matter much for the growth of the...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...nario. A company is made up or made by the the founders and the employees as well. Emp...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...nario. A company is made up or made by the the founders and the employees as well. Emp...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., opinions suggestions are never asked. Which is where I believe the company fall bac...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...emphasis is given to employees feedback.There can be various ways, like conducting po...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, as to, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03561643836 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98898961572 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.454721047 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7368421053 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332366552227 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891413613814 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748897754892 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182558768945 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786814566254 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.