In any enterprise, the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product.
The most important thing for an entreprise is to earn profits. It does not really matter if the entreprise has developed an excelent process of production or if its final product is remarkable. However, in order to reach this goal of earn profits, the companies must satisfy the demand of their customers, and they only could do this by selling products of better quality at a lower price. Therefore, I consider that both things are important, the process of making and the final product, so I disagree with the claim. In what follows I will explain my reasons.
To begin, the process of doing something is necessary to produce better products. So companies use to invest a lot of time, money and effort to enhance their manufactoring process. This allow companies to reduce costs and increase productivity. For instance, if a company who works doing holes change its process of doing them using a machine instead of human force, will produce more holes, in less time and a lower price. This will produce an improvement in the quality of its services.
However, no matter how good is the process, the companies must find customers. And, in this step, the final product is crucial. This is due to the fact that the last owner of the capital is not the owner of the company, but their customers. It is useless to find the best process of production if you cannot sell that product to anybody. Take for instance the case of Pepsico, the company which produces potato chips and others fast foods. None can say that they do not have a sofisticated manufactoring process, but, if their usual clients changed their mind and wanted to buy more healthy food, its sails would reduce dramatically.
Moreover, we have the case in which a very good product can be produce without the need of a sofisticated manufactoring process. This is to say, it is not always necesary to find an advance technological process when you can sell your product anyway because it is atractive to your costumers. For example, the process of making bread is a very simple one. You just need flour, salt and water, among others, an the final products is bought all over the world.
To conclude, the manufactoring process is not the most important part in a business only. If you could find a product that you can sell to many people, either with a simple or a complex process of making, it is enough for your company to be a successful one. Of course that an improvement in the process will yield the enterprice to enhance their productivity, but this is only one part of the business, you need to find the most rentable way to sell your products too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69264069264 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62355520659 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463203463203 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3405280947 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2608695652 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0869565217 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13043478261 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250992967918 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803730213733 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597641138476 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151743374118 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319814299085 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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