I do not agree with the topic that those people in power in any profession should step down after five years. Actually people suffered those who were atuhoritarians like Hitler and it is true that most of us learned a lot from history. While I contend that we still need to analyze the issue by differnt conditions. In that we could benefit from both the old and young who take power. Moreover, we should not breake the harmoious envrionment in some field whehter they need the people in power quit evey five years. I will address my views as follows.
To begin with, there are some profession taht we should make changes after a certain time. Especially in democractic conutries, like China, the leader of my country should be reelcted for every five years and he/she should only continue one five-year election after the previous one. Also, the President of US should be reelected in every four years , and eight years is the limit of the President which was ruled by the Constitution of US. This is the reflection of the people, and they were elected by the people, thus in order to serve for the people more efficiently, both of the leaders should rule the countries within their limited time. As our predcessor had suffered a lot before the establishement of democratice contries. The emperor of China exploited the Chinese as much as they can thus the could enjoythem selves in the Palaces. Meanwhile, as newcomers of the American continent, those European ancestor wanted to be free from the ruling of the Queen and embraced new freedom as their descendends bordcasting today. Surly it is, people love freedom under the law. That is what lots of people cherished while woe for some of us could not obtain. In this occasion, we need democracy which could be effectively refleceted by the tenure of the Leadership. Yes we need it.
While we need to hold on a little as we could see the difference of the presidency between China and US, as my concern, whether the five years for reelction or four years is totally up to the people of the conutry, thus there is no nccessary for the same limit as five years, it should depends on the condtions. As for the presidency, it should be enacted by the people of the conutries.
While on the other hand, there are some areas would not embrace the frequently changes of the people in charge. This need us to judge it from the othe areas. As my concern, if people with the leadership lives or works well, why should they frequently change the leaders. While some one may argues that it would by unfair for all of teh people as anyone could be the leader if he/she could runs the profession well, while to me I contend not every conditon suitbale for the five years change of the leadership.In science area, there were some celebties died long before while if they were alive, I still would like them to be the leadership of the scientific reasearch as they had witnessed lots of things that we have not. Like Einstein , as he was so significant to our reasearch , he still could guide us to make more research of the Theory of the relavance, Stephen Hwaking, likewise, people could not make sure whether we could discover the black hole without his cound from the speaker.
In all, I contend we should no be so absolute on the topic as there are many professions in the world, we should analyze them seperately. So as my concern, in politics, the stepping down of the leadership for a certain time would benefit people of the country, while there are some fields we need the predcessors to guide us for the further progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, as for, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 36.0 12.4196629213 290% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 33.0505617978 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2944.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 635.0 442.535393258 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63622047244 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01988110783 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52585611158 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436220472441 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 911.7 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 13.0 3.10617977528 419% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.6692531949 60.3974514979 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4230769231 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88461538462 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141103302816 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492896969253 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742040034093 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098612337727 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487298708334 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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