To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The author raises controversial issue that a public offficial must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards to be an effective leader. Here, the author tries to convince with visually contradict statement. However, A public official shold not maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. He should intract with public without any ethical or moral standards to improve economical as well as social conditions of country.
First of all, a public official must maintain lower ethical and moral standards. Because of this, he can intract with public more efficiently and can gain their trust towards him. For example, one public official who has the highest ethical and moral standards cannot listen to the problems of the public and makes his own decision. This decision might bring injustice to the public. Thus, that officers loose public's faith towards him. So, a public official should not maintain high standards for the public's fidelity towards govenment and this can make them effective leader.
Furthermore, one effective leader is a person who puts his ego aside and listen to the public regarding their problem. The public official who has high moral and ethical standards can believe himself supirior to others. He always try to ignore person who is not at his moral or ethical standards. Because of this, he might be biased towards famous or rich personalities. Hence, this reduces faith of the public in government. Moreover, it is harmful for society and for governing officials.
Although, at some point of their decision public official should have to maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. Jugdes should have to be firm in their decision. So, they can not be moved by imotion arguments by culprit. This might helpful for society and country to make country crime free. Hence, we can say that in judgement process this claim must be applied. This can bring transpirancy in judgment of cardinal.
In conclusion, I just want to cite that a public official should maintain the highest ethical and moral standards but only in judgement processes. Because of this relationship between the public and public official improves. Moreover, this also help to make better country for the people of counrty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 502, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...uld not maintain high standards for the publics fidelity towards govenment and this can...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...e himself supirior to others. He always try to ignore person who is not at his mora...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19801980198 0.240241500013 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.123762376238 0.157235817809 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.143564356436 0.0880659088768 163% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0594059405941 0.0497285424764 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0470297029703 0.0444667217837 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10396039604 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0123762376238 0.0406280797675 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.57807632141 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321782178218 0.030933414821 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0841584158416 0.0997080785238 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0470297029703 0.0249443105267 189% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00990099009901 0.0148568991511 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2233.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 362.0 452.878318584 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16850828729 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.42817679558 0.366273622748 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32044198895 0.280924506359 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198895027624 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116022099448 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57807632141 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444751381215 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.7235593366 55.4138127331 83% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.48 23.380412469 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9605825191 59.4972553346 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.32 141.124799967 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.48 23.380412469 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 46.524198895 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.36559139785 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459239586043 0.391690518653 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11060537858 0.123202303941 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0797628850715 0.077325440228 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.465640962542 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125536740127 0.149214159877 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169685686938 0.161403998019 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108031385333 0.0892212321368 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.416621112705 0.385218514788 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0807968305247 0.0692045440612 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337544669134 0.275328986314 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551035466629 0.0653680567796 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.4325221239 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 7.22455752212 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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