The ethical and moral standards are the most important things for all careers and positions. A public official who cannot maintain their ethical and moral standards always cause a lot of problems to the society and also himself. Therefore, I totally agree that a public official who want to be an effective leader should maintain the highest moral standards.
Public officials have crucial roles in keeping all the society’s activities to run smoothly. The police have a responsibility to find and bring criminals to the courts. The judges have to make decision whether suspects are guilty or not and give them the proper punishments. If these officials do not have good ethical or moral standards, they may not be able to provide their services to all citizens equally. When an unethical policeman receives a bribe from a criminal, he may release that criminal without any punishment. This type of immoral actions will cause the society to be full of criminals and the unrested situations will certainly occur frequently. This example shows that unethical officers will bring the societies to be corrupt and they cannot be effective leaders for those societies.
Not only unethical officials will lead the societies to the disasters but they also finally put themselves into problems. The societies cannot accept the immoral behaviors of public officials because these behaviors do not benefit the majority of people. Moreover, officials cannot hide their immoral behavior for a long time. We can see several political leaders who involve in the corruptions being caught in the end and they need to spend their remaining life in jails. People certainly do not consider these punished officials as effective leaders.
Some may argues that the effective leaders can take some immoral actions in order to benefit their society in some ways. For example, a diplomat may make secret deals with some countries to let them accept illegal goods from his country. The deal may provide a lot of income to the country in a short term but no secret can last forever. Finally, other nations will be able to track this unethical behavior and this country can be banned by the other countries. It may not be able to export any good and the country economy will finally collapse. This example shows that the leaders who have immoral behaviors will bring the nation to the downfall and should not be considered as an effective leader at all.
In conclusion, the ethical and moral standards are the essential criteria for public officials to be effective leaders. Without these standards, they will be unsuccessful to bring the societies and themselves to the glory.
Essay evaluation report
Not only unethical officials will lead the societies to the disasters but they also finally put themselves into problems.
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
flaws:
No. of Words: 438 while No. of Different Words: 198
Sentence Length SD: 4.339 7.5 //"Sentence Length SD is low" means that the essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 438 350
No. of Characters: 2177 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.575 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.97 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.523 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 169 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 137 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.043 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.339 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.522 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.129 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... societies and themselves to the glory.
^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211740041929 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.14465408805 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115303983229 0.0880659088768 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0607966457023 0.0497285424764 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041928721174 0.0444667217837 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0754716981132 0.12292977631 61% => OK
Participles: 0.0146750524109 0.0406280797675 36% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.63441927674 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0440251572327 0.030933414821 142% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.136268343816 0.0997080785238 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0503144654088 0.0249443105267 202% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0104821802935 0.0148568991511 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2673.0 2732.02544248 98% => OK
No of words: 438.0 452.878318584 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10273972603 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390410958904 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317351598174 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2100456621 0.200843997647 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143835616438 0.132149295362 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63441927674 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454337899543 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.8708373644 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0434782609 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1952345018 59.4972553346 39% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.217391304 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0434782609 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.434782608696 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 50.7786380782 51.4728631049 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.22033898305 1.64882698954 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464839918949 0.391690518653 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140221394342 0.123202303941 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0778144629377 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521985066555 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140452899004 0.149214159877 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190654415194 0.161403998019 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102258545568 0.0892212321368 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.389614505688 0.385218514788 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0227422059976 0.0692045440612 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35716766766 0.275328986314 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832932091155 0.0653680567796 127% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.30420353982 245% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 12.0 3.66592920354 327% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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