In reality, to be an effective leader is not like to be the leader like Captain America in the Marvels films, who resembled justice and integrity. As my concern, I fundmentally agree with the issue that a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards, in that the world we are living in is not evey individual perceives, from companies to countires, the mission of an effective leader may vary, while a good man, a well-named person should be the fame that every leader chasing for,even Hitler wanted to serve his country and people. I will address my views as below.
To begin with, an effective leader should lead the whole group gain the archievements with efficiency. Thus the way these leaders should take to this target is the mission for them. As we know, Gandhi who led millions of indian people to take the no violence and no cooperation movement, he was the standard of ethics and morality. He was highly cultivated while he did not chase for fortune and money, he even loomed for himself as the example for the indians to live on their own. He led his people with his actual behavior. Once he lost a shoe on the train then he left another on the track immediately, only hoped the one who found the first shoe could get a pair of them. Then he led the indian out ot the ruling of British and he was the father of India. Likewise, the martin luther king, another spiritual leader of African American movement, he also led the african american people to fight for the equal rights and was honored by the world. They are all on behalf of the highest eithical and moral standards, ther were all made great changes efficiently which still influent the world now.
On the other hand, however, as Schopenhauer said, everyone conceive the limit of their eyesights are the limit of the world. So I believe there are still some effective leaders who did not maitain the highest ethical and moral standards. In reality, it is hard to be the best or this obligation should not be the burden for those who want to be effective leaders.There are many ways of being effective for leaders. The mission for them is to lead the group to make succsess efficiently. This is what we usually experince in our lives. As for countries, China is the proper case I want to ilustrate, in that in the past forty years, China has exprinced a fast development of the society, the GDP grows 5-8 percent anuually which could be impossible in other conutries. While I belive these archievements could not mainly count on the ethics or moralities of leaders.Instead, it is the teamwork of the Chinese people, as we are intelligent and diligent, that is the reason for these great changes in China. Besides, the open and reform policy did contribute a lot on the archievement.
In all, due to the complexity of the world, the highest ethical and moral standards should be the quality that every leader chase for, while there are still other ways to be an effective leader. Thus this criterion should not be the demands for every leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, likewise, may, so, still, then, thus, well, while, as for, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2507.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 538.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65985130112 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56597755647 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479553903346 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 784.8 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7937794605 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.954545455 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230118035168 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663415844207 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759943751856 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173633728665 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691451273966 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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