The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.
As the use of fire for the first time thousands of years ago distincted human beings and other animals, industrial relovlution brought modern society to the human beings, every era of humans would be opened by the one of most important technology advancement. At the beggining of the 21st Century, I consider that the artificial intelegence would be brought to us. I will address my views of this emerging technology as follows.
To begin with, the artificial intelegence (short for AI) shocked us in the end of the last Century, when the chess champion failed the game with AI computer-Deep Blue. Years ago the AI alpha-go amazed us again, this AI also won the chess champion of human. Beyond the game we may discover it was not just a simple computer player who can play with us like the video games. This advancing deep computing means it would have the mind of its own as it would predict the consequence of the results from billions of the possiblities. THe computer have already though for billions of times before it made the decision. Thus,from the chess game to the weather report, there will be another revolution of human technology. This revolution would open a new era.
Moerover, besides the chess games, the appication of AI would be booming in this century. Due to the rapid development of deep learing technology, the AI would find the therapy of curing cancers possibly. Firstly, millions of patients' specimens data would be collected in the database. Then, after learing the common conditions of these patients, the AI would expel the unusefull therapies and find the effective ones. Thus there will come the day when diseases like cancer or diabtetes cured by the AI.
In addtion, the transportation of human would be more efficeint by introducing the AI into our traffic system. By using this promising technology, the time of traffic lights would be altered wisely due to the traffic condtions. While this is merely a small field of this thechnology. Thing about if the whole nation's traffic system is under the control of the AI, we woule benefit more than from the alternation city traffic lights. It would be more convienient for people to travell fast and safely.
Actually, there would be more change of the AI bring to us in this century as the sigularity of the booming of AI was said at the 2050s. I believe this new technology would promise a bright future in the world. People would have more benefits more than they thought. Just like the invetion of the cars, once people thought it should be slower than horses even a law enacted to limit the speed of the cars should not be faster than the horses. Now it the time we reconsider the AI which would give us more.
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75957446809 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58292001055 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517021276596 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4686254277 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.48 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083840624132 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313556728267 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405743160773 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510206672597 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191147207458 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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