People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position y

People's atittudes are varied in lots of factors, while it narrows down the scale of these factors if we merely discuss the outside influences like the immediata situation as well as the surroundings or the society. In my concern, we should simplify the factors from interior and outerior cases hence there are more analyzation outcomes besides the factors metioned above. I will address my view in three points.

So let's start from the atittudes of people. Due to the education, social value attitude and traditional atittudes influencing us, as we are considering one certain business, the conceptions and ideas may be quite different among all of us, which originate from the various minds of us. So this huge differennce amolst determines people's attitudes are various in the same business. The trade war between US and China is a battle neither of the two major countries want to be involved, while taken the consideration of each others' into grant, it seems the two countries have no choice when it violate the benefits of themselves, that is the different conceptions of the same topic-foever benefits, to the Governments of the two big countries, they can hardly to be assumed that their some of maldefeasance triggered this war.While on the other hand, as the third country like Brazil or Japan, the attitudes of this big issue are very sanguine, in that if US do not sell soybeans to China, for example, the Brazil will grasp this golden opportunity to make a huge fortune by the trade of soybean with China. So have a deep consideration about it, the attitudes aof people are so different that they are very worthful be to digged in.

Let's go on, there are some cases that people should make choice right now. So at this case the immediate situations are the main force to let people show a attitude with no hesitate. I belive if there is someone in operation in the hospital who need blood emergently, most of us like me will go to the blood station to donate blood after knowing this emergency if our blood matched. On the other hand, if the leader of a country , considering the benefits of the people in this nation, his attitude obviously will be influenced by the society as a whole. Like trade war, the President Trump just fight for their people's beinifit as there are so many jobs created in China mostly at expense of the people out of work in the US. In this ocassion, the society would influence the one's attitude.

To an individual, the ratio of the ouside cases which infleunce the attitude is insignificant. While the key to the people's attidude should be on his own after consideration while not exhibit immediately which looks like naïve. In my opinion, the people of the society are evovlving by the age, while decades ago, there simply one attitude of Chinese to the US, the evil country who play the role of the international police, while dur to the development of the whole world especially the rapid development of China, the attitudes of people in China toward US vary in differeny ways.

In conclusion, the people's attidudes are different due to the cases they meet. So I do not agree with this essay.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, look, may, so, third, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2605.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 546.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77106227106 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6838116242 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483516483516 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 853.2 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.354079451 60.3974514979 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.105263158 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7368421053 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157258094934 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552561902567 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369930905187 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921703224359 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281211175042 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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