I foundmentally do not disagree with the essay that the Government should not fund any scientific research even if their resluts are unclear. This unknown result is for the present rather than the future, in this degree, the Government should help these scientfic studyings. More important, given to the nature of scientifc reasearch is full of uncertainty that deserve us to explore forever. I will adress my views in three points.
To begin with, we should make clear that most of the scientific researches are explored without the predicatable result that the scientist could assume. This amzaing case is the main force to evolve the human because we are learning knowledge from zero. Millions years ago, the primative human beings are seperated from the primates when they could use fire while nobody taught them to do so. The fire, it burns, it hurts,but also warms us. While under year's of observation which nobody knew how long it took for the human to master this useful tool. From then on, the human beings farewelled to the age that they had to suffer from the cold winter,and more over, embraced the new era of human civiliazation. This is the most wonderful case which is one of the most significant event to us.
In addtion, with the time flying, we are living in a society with rapid development from nothing to prosperity. After the industialzaion of the world, there are so many researaches which seemed unblievable to the predcessors of us. As Leonardo Da Vinci imagined in his time again and again. People could fly in the early 1900s with the development of technology which seems unclear for human beings. What's more the invetion of Penicillin was almost a happy accident for human because Flemin was not intend to do this research. So the scientific area was unclear for us then while everyting seems so normal at present.
The histroy always share the same stage due to the trace of human development, there are still lots of scientific fields which still unknown for us, so here is the answser you may expain. Yes the areas which are unknown temporarily while the humans' endeavor to the future is forever. In this way, the Clone Technology could be mastered in the future which is still with lots of unclear areas in it.So the govenrment should fund these researches in order to propel the society's development. For now, most of the cancers can not be cured, there is the population bombing issue almost in every region of the Earth, these issues which is not clear for now could be solved in the future with the help of the authority.
However, as we are dicsussing the scientific research like the Clone Technology ,we should be cautious because of ethic issues. Beseides the proper help of the Governments, there are more resposiblity for the authority to controll this research in case it would be used in improper ways. So the Govenments sometimes should not only fund these reseaches but also regulate them in orders.
In conclusion, the Governments should take the resposiblity to control the research which is unknow for results when they funds them as possible as they can.The scientifc research itestlf is of the uncertainty ,while that is the place which we can make more progress to evovle the whole society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, well, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2706.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87567567568 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58759315601 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484684684685 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 831.6 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1455383508 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.24 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235697078857 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064847447177 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060750796271 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131869150764 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428666367226 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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