It is very common among people these days to eat at different restaurants from time to time if not daily. To take care of those who would like to break the routine inside the house and enjoy eating outside, there should be certain plans or policies, either by the government or the ministry responsible for that, to give the maximum care of these people to enjoy good health and good meals, too. It is very important to maintain people’s health because of its positive benefits to the individuals, society and after all the whole country.
First and foremost, the Ministry of Health generally must oblige restaurant owners to announce their menus of what will be served for the whole day and night. This will help the diners to know what to expect when they come to the restaurant. At this point, it will be wiser if the restaurant creates a website and puts the menu there for everyone to know the meals served in advance as it organizes their diet and work on their health problems with accordance to what “healthy” meals the restaurant serves. Also, it is so very crucial for the Ministry of Health to make sure to match the menu with the meals being served. This would be a good solution towards the public health safety.
Second of all, it will be a wise idea to bring nutrition experts inside the restaurants for the diners to personally listen to what these experts advise on the meals they are eating, what is healthy based on their age, weight or their health status. It is very important not to forget that the meals must match what the nutrition experts say or advise, and we can say that the Ministry of Health can be held responsible for that. Furthermore, the meals being advertised, whether on the menu or the website, must match what is actually inside the restaurant. Because the absence of monitoring, a lot of restaurant owners may not take the issue seriously or shirk in doing it.
Finally, the restaurant owners must be in constant contact with their customers even right after leaving the restaurants. This could be to ask them to write their opinion about whether they are satisfied with what they eat at the restaurant or not and whether they observe any kind of positive health changes happening to them or not.
In conclusion, taking care of people’s health and trying to avoid any kind of diet-related health problems at restaurants is of a great significance to the people primarily. I agree with all these kinds of precautious plans to have healthy people, especially with less diet-related health problems. After all, the benefit comes to include the society and the country.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'after all', 'in conclusion', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217391304348 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.148221343874 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0592885375494 0.0880659088768 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0533596837945 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0494071146245 0.0444667217837 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118577075099 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0296442687747 0.0406280797675 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63027068454 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0533596837945 0.030933414821 172% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114624505929 0.0997080785238 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0296442687747 0.0249443105267 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0197628458498 0.0148568991511 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2637.0 2732.02544248 97% => OK
No of words: 455.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7956043956 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314285714286 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21978021978 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142857142857 0.200843997647 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0989010989011 0.132149295362 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63027068454 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448351648352 0.48968727796 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.6928043794 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 26.7647058824 23.380412469 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.402568008 59.4972553346 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.117647059 141.124799967 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7647058824 23.380412469 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.674092028746 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 48.7427278604 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.45669291339 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478251051479 0.391690518653 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162993163414 0.123202303941 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0744871254381 0.077325440228 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.631080880516 0.547984918172 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140605154611 0.149214159877 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221828798874 0.161403998019 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590240632829 0.0892212321368 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.444963232441 0.385218514788 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.125069089756 0.0692045440612 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340017318243 0.275328986314 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461988336652 0.0653680567796 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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