The best ideas arise from a passionate
interest in commonplace things.
Without passion, one cannot pursue great and radical ideas since there are often hardships when people tread this path. Many great inventions in history have been a result of keen observation of
mundane phenomenon taking place in the world. Therefore, I mostly agree with statement for the following two reasons.
To begin with, many great and radical ideas have been elicited by simple phenomenon occurring in nature. For instance, the idea of attraction force put on objects by earth was realized by
Sir Isaac Newton when he observed an apple falling from a tree. What he could not achieve using a raft of complex mathematical tools, he did through merely observing his everyday life and construing it
in an unconventional manner. Also, passion played a tantamount role in further developing on the observation and relentlessly pursuing the idea in the face of stern opposition from the
contemporary thinkers.
The thought of humans flying was and unfathomable one at the time, but a simple observation of how birds fly led to the invention of
aeroplanes. The wright brothers mimicked the way how birds fly by basing the design of the aircraft wings on the bird's wings. Of course, the wright brothers were met with disdain and
people did not have any credence in them. But, through the passion for their work and sheer will, they kept at it, and in the end, which culminated in on ethe most inventions in human history.
In sports, you have to constantly develop new ways in order to stay competetive. For instance, the scoop shot in cricket came into existence when a batsmen observed how labourer
was shifting watermelons from one truck to another. The labourer was not even his body to place the watermelons, he just used his legs to form a pivot and used his intuition to place the
watermelons appropriately.
Complex ideas are often built on the back of simple ideas but there should be a passion to interpret commonplace things in a radical way.
There may be cases where pondering too much on mundane things leads to a waste of time and resources, but there are far too many examples in history to suggest that the benefits
far outweigh these risks. Therefore, both factors, a radical interpretation of commonplace and the passion to build upon that idea in the face of opposition give birth to the greatest of ide
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91708542714 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71189344395 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547738693467 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5240500898 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.117647059 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.97078651685 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175823531306 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554484028277 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759009944221 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569579903512 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760391431646 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.