The best ideas arise from a passionate
interest in commonplace things.
Without passion, one cannot pursue great and radical ideas, since there are often hardships when people tread this path. Many great inventions in history have been a result of keen observation of
mundane phenomenas taking place in the world. Therefore, I mostly agree with statement for the following two reasons.
To begin with, many great and radical ideas have been ilicited by simple phenomenas occuring in nature. For instance, the idea of attraction force put on objects by earth was realized by
newton by watching an apple fall from a tree. What he could not achieve using a raft of complex mathematical tools, he did through merely observing his everyday life and construing it
in a unconventional manner. Also, passion played a tantamount role in further developing on the observation and relentlessly pursuing the idea in the face of stern opposition from the
contemporary thinkers.
Another example can be of the wright brothers. The idea that humans can fly in the sky was unfathommable at the time, but a simple observation of how birds fly led to the invention of
airplanes. The wright brothers mimicked the way how birds fly by basing the design of the aircraft wings on the bird's wings. Of course, the wright brothers were met with disdain and
people did not have any credence in them. But, through the passion for their work and sheer will, they kept at it, and in the end, which culminated in on ethe most inventions in human history.
Both factors, a radical interpretaion of commonplace and the passion to build upon that idea in the face of opposition give birth to teh greatest of ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 275.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93090909091 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69968103411 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4090826824 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.307692308 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141416151176 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451247609719 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543187196672 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529079243246 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551031545063 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.