The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Innovation leads to a better life for humanity. Creating such wonderful feat requires combination of factors to change everything that came before into a more advantageous thing. Technology, for example, enables humans achieve many dreams previously deemed as impossible. The creation of innovation requires various ideas that arise from the innovators’ heads, and sometimes it needs unusual way of thinking compared to any popular belief held at that time. The notion that says best idea will come from people who have great passion toward things that are common logically does not match the aforementioned requisite of how we need peculiarity in thinking to generate ideas, thus, creating innovation for all. Skills and experiences alone would not immediately result in a generation of idea, and with a passion in something that is common does not help much at all. People need different perspective and motivation to even start and then develop an idea, and there are some examples and reasons for it.
First, idea tends to change common things into more applicable and useful products. Most people will be bored with routinity and when they face the same difficulty that they are facing every single day. Some of them, who have unique approach of thinking, or at least have a wish of relinquishing the difficulties, will at some point create something that ameliorate the challenges during the time when they use the old method. The will to make life better is inherently nurtured inside all humans, and this motivation will energize people to make a change. If this motivation, combined with adequate skills and experiences, is sufficient to break through the commonplace of the past then an idea will be born. An example of this would be the time when, in the past, people were traveling using traditional method such as riding a horse, driving a horse carriage, or even walking to go one place to another. As time passed, the innovators of the past will start to think “how can we go faster?”, so that they would no longer feel the long journey that was uncomfortable and inconvenient. Thus, the cars were created, and by centuries later, many more advanced transportation, like jet plane or high speed train, are developed. The willingness of improving life will, at last, make people want to change the ordinary everyday conditions that often become unreliable and full of hardships. Ideas will create useful innovations, and if the rejection of what is common is higher, the better idea will be. Best idea does not come from people who love ordinary thing.
On the other hand, one may say that experiences will reveal what is lacking behind that is masked by common jobs or activities. Sometimes people must try to focus to find something that is out of place, or to seek the weakness of the system or processes that are done by the workers. For example, great worker at manufacturing industry will sometimes find a fault within the system that hinder the efficient production or even harm other workers at the production plant. This skill of detection requires tremendous focus to the job, and only people that are keen with the routinity that can reveal the flaw using their great focus and dedication. This skill is one example that can we take from great manufacturing company, like Toyota and Volkswagen, to reveal the other side of this discussion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'says the best'.
Suggestion: says the best
...lief held at that time. The notion that says best idea will come from people who have gre...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...mon is higher, the better idea will be. Best idea does not come from people who love...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, thus, at least, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2814.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 563.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99822380107 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70676283749 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50621669627 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 886.5 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8511001784 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.347826087 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4782608696 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52173913043 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0921694721226 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317777960311 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332962217034 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685439263646 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434022251094 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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