The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting your

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The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The prompt explains that the greatest ideas come from a passionate interest in commonplace things. Throughout the timeline of human history, there has been a plethora of ideas that have expanded people's knowledge. The creation of the wheel, the discovery of fire, the dissecting the human body to understand how we are structured and our function are just a few ideas that have propelled our knowledge as a species. I disagree with the prompt as the greatest ideas do not come from simple places and here is why: most ideas come from uncommon/rare places such as the transition electric vehicles and scientific theories do not arise from commonplace things. However, while the advancing technology does start from simple to complex, this progression does not mean that all ideas come start from commonplace things.
First, lets examine ideas such as the trend towards electric vehicles in the United States. The creation of the internal combustion chamber that cars use was in itself a massive and complex idea and for roughly one hundred years, that was the forefront of everyday travel. Currently, with the concern of climate change, the drive away from the use of gasoline-powered vehicles is growing and the need for electric vehicles is growing. The creation of this new technology was nothing short of complex and rare as it has taken many years to understand how to collect, store and use electricity to move cars hundreds of miles. Thousands of hours, thousands of people trying to comprehend the physics and the limitations that we have with the technology. The idea of the electric vehicle rose not from a commonplace but rather the complex topics of physics, chemistry and the concern for the environment.
Another reason why I disagree with the prompt is the discovery and development of scientific theories such as general relativity, special relativity and The Big Bang, all of which started not from commonplace but rose from observing the uncommon and unique world surrounding us. These ideas grew from the unknown areas of humanity for which people like Isaac Newton or Albert Einstein committed every second of their lives studying, testing, recording everything they experienced. There is no commonplace for which these ideas rose from sat unknown in front of humanity for years, waiting to be discovered. Ideas and theories such as these come from complex places and thus have notoriety of being some of the greatest ideas humanity has discovered.
There could be some ideas that develop from commonplace things such as the invention of the telephone, which helped to get information from one individual to another faster than mailing. However, these ideas that arise from commonplace things are not the best ideas due to their lack of complexity as we can see that these simple ideas fade away and better ideas come into play.
In conclusion, while the prompt explains that the best ideas come from commonplace things, I disagree with this statement. The best ideas in fact come from complex places, which require many hours of thinking, creating and improving in order to have a great idea to push mankind to further improve both our selfs and the world that surrounds us.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 720, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ideas'' or 'idea's'?
Suggestion: ideas'; idea's
...notoriety of being some of the greatest ideas humanity has discovered. There could...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...greatest ideas humanity has discovered. There could be some ideas that develop f...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2673.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 528.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65717942066 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443181818182 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4512491656 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.684210526 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7894736842 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233492292761 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894903315059 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613750900351 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155557109463 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442306966984 0.0667264976115 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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