The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
According to the speaker, the best ideas arises from the passionate interest in the common place things. I tend to agree with him given the examples like formulation of Universal law of Gravitation by Newton, Iphone of Apple Inc company, camera shutter model griper for space use etc.
For many times , world has proven that thinking with commonplace phenomenon can lead better ideas to solve any problem. For instance, Newton discovered the idea of universal law of gravitation on the basis of the phenomenon of apple falling on his head. This is a simple phenomenon for anyone else that apple always falls on the ground, but Newton studied this commonplace idea by questioning why, which led the greatest equation now: he universal law of gravitation. Thus, sometimes commonplace things can lead to the better ideas.
Another example for my harmony with the speaker is the Iphone of the Apple company. Steve Jobs and his mates revolutionized the world with a new type of phone with multitasking facilities. They did not innovated new, but optimized the commonplace ideas of the phones. This idea led Apple Inc to be first ever a successful company. Thus, great achievements can be obtained by the commonplace things.
On the other hand, sometimes, to make great ideas, we have to follow sinuous algorithms. For instance, Einstein - who formulated the Theory of relativity followed circuitous mathematical and physical principles to formulate the theory. This theory is a breakthrough success on the field of science and technology to comprehend the universe. This is why, sometimes we have to focus on sinuous things too to make great ideas.
In conclusion, passionate ideas on the commonplace things can lead the better ideas. So is fruitful to consider even smallest phenomenon happening near about us to generate those great ideas that can give us insight on great many phenomenon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'innovate'
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun phenomenon seems to be countable; consider using: 'many phenomena', 'many phenomenons'.
Suggestion: many phenomena; many phenomenons
...ideas that can give us insight on great many phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8609120745 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542207792208 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7337084638 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4705882353 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136717267614 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493319569223 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469226160865 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803267744706 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468650728045 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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