Above writing holds such a true statement i strongly concede with the statement. Peoples have different ability to defend themselves. However,this kind of ability, i absolutely admire it.
Firstly lets talk about a lawyer, a famous lawyer who can win any sort of cases,defending over his/her opponent. In this world, there isn't always sure that the innocent one has to win or the innocent one always wins. The one who stands strong with confident usually wins. It just depends upon your ability to express you to win over the odds.In courts,many innocent people are losing their cases. This has resulted due to their lack of ability to win over it since their opponent had that ability to prove them right although they are wrong. Its an test and if you stay strong and have ability to convince others then you win. However, people rarely accepts such ability. They might take it negatively or they might think that its wrong. But its a test and nobody wants to be a looser. Everyone wants victory.
Secondly, if people can prove and convince them right even when they are wrong,then that ability can give you victory in every cases. You can convince people in an argument when you are right too. In a way its like having laddus in two hands. Such ability are rarely found. However, such ability seems to be dangerous. In an argument,if the innocent person couldn't convince his/her viewpoint then this may lead him/her to anxiety and if the matter is serious then he/she may commit suicide. This case is commonly seem in our society. An innocent person is losing theirs life. Anyway,the argument shouldn't be made such serious. People must try to end it up without severe consequences on both the side. As far as possible, the right one must be able to convince his viewpoint.
In sum, its an test and ofcourse the one who is strong enouhg to get through it wins and that's also a kind of talent and ability that he/she becomes able to represent himself/herself.There is a saying "Everything is fair in love and war."
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78125 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61903931418 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6982603252 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.32 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.08 23.4991977007 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.16 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207344843691 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558737102439 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068412190697 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120503349122 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374476712291 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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