Best way for preparing young generation for leadership is through cooperation or competitiveness.
Co-operation and competition are two schools of thought, which an individual required for personal and social development. The author states that co-operation is more important than competition for leadership. The given topic is highly contentious because some people may go for the topic while others can't approve it at all. I mostly agree with the given argument for the following reasons.
First of all, a sense of co-operation is very important to solve the global issue such as climate change. it is almost imppossible for any country to settle the problem of climate change and global warming. For instance, if Nepal started to mitigate the effect of climate change, it's individual effort to solve the effect of the climate change will be inadequate. so, it is necessary for the leadership to have ability to co-operate with the leaders of the others countries to solve the serious problem. if the leader have not any sense of co-operation and have only competition attitude then the settlement of complex issues are very difficult. so, it is very necessary to install a sense of co-operation in the mind of young child ( future leader of the country) so that they can settle the mos serious problem.
Secondly, leaders have responsibility to perform various group works. hence, it is very pressing for the young people to develop a sense of co-operation among the young people so that they can perform their work more efficiently. For example, consider a leader in society who have to settle dispute between two parties. if he hasn't a sense of co-operation and has only a sense of competition then it is very arduous task for him to settle an issues. when people bahave like a competitior, then the trust of the follower toward his leader will decline, so it is very necessary to develop a sense of co-operation in the young people.
However, in certain fields, healthy competition is necessary. For instances, in business, a sense of competition is necessary. when individual do not have a sense of competition then the likelihood of getting higher profit may not be possible. it is possible that the other competitior may develop a similar products and the sell of the others comapny products may decreased. In sports, a sense of competition is often desirable. The main goal of players during their game is to defeat others tteam and become the winner of the game. when player have a sense of competition that I/we have to win the match then they work hard and make great efforts to achieve that goal. Similarly, a sense of healthy competition is often required in education as well. when an individual have a sense of competition that I have to stand first in the class then he try to make great efforts to achieve that goal, which ultimately increases the quality of education as well.
Though, a sense of competition is often desirable in some field such as business, sports, education etc,. However, a sense of co-operation is more important for the overall development of the country. hence, young child should have installed a sense of co-operation in them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he global issue such as climate change. it is almost imppossible for any country t...
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... co-operation in the mind of young child future leader of the country so that the...
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...ttle dispute between two parties. if he hasnt a sense of co-operation and has only a ...
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...team and become the winner of the game. when player have a sense of competition that...
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...er have a sense of competition that I/we have to win the match then they work ha...
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...he overall development of the country. hence, young child should have installed a se...
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...talled a sense of co-operation in them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2562.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92692307692 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83440336855 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405769230769 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 822.6 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3848106676 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2592592593 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127873323794 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494498588275 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518171488986 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961961536396 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522607869718 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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