People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

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People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The author asserts that people are most closely related to an issues are also most critical of it. The given statement is highly contentious because different people have different opinions on the given topic. some people may go for the topic, but some people may stand completely against the given topic. I mostly agree with the given topic for the following reasons.

First of all, people who are most closely related to an idea, know about the possible alternatives of that idea. they have information about the pros and cons of the given argument as a result it is easier for them to critically evaluate the given argument. For instance, a person who has not basic knowledge about the physics can not make any good judgment of the any physics theory such as string theory. A chemist can not make a good judgment of the physics theory because basic physics background information is needed for the evaluation of the theory. so, it is part-and-parcel to analyze any idea, basic knowledge about the concerned idea.

Furthermore, people who are most closely committed to an idea or policy, want to make superior idea or policy because they have invested large amount of effort and want to gain return from their investment. For example, CEO of the CG company, Binod Chaudhary is more concerned to the idea or policy of their marketing to reach larger population in order to get higher profit then the others people because he had invested huge amount of money. so, for the sustainability of his business, he is more aware about his idea or policy. if the given idea or policy is failed, then it may adversely affect his reputation as well. so for the higher return and maintenance of reputation, he always try to make better idea or policy. if he found any error then he try to eliminate that error through different means. however, under certain situation, people who are not deeply committed to an idea or policy also make critical interpretation. Many fields are inter-related and for the better understanding of the given topic, ones needs information from the various background and such individual can make critical analysis of the purposed opinion. Say, government purpose a new policy on patent right about the development of the new plant variety. individual who is not directly involved in the development of the new plant variety may give critical interpretations of that purpose measure for the benefit of other.

In a nutshell, though some critical interpretations may come from the people who are not deeply committed to an idea or policy, however, most critical judgment of the purposed idea is come from the people who are seriously committed to that idea as they have knowledge of both pros and cons. Further they want to make better of their idea, so make a critical analysis of the purposed idea or policy.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an issue' or simply 'issues'?
Suggestion: an issue; issues
...that people are most closely related to an issues are also most critical of it. The given...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... different opinions on the given topic. some people may go for the topic, but some p...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...the possible alternatives of that idea. they have information about the pros and con...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...eeded for the evaluation of the theory. so, it is part-and-parcel to analyze any i...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: So
...e he had invested huge amount of money. so, for the sustainability of his business...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...is more aware about his idea or policy. if the given idea or policy is failed, the...
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Line 5, column 624, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: So
...dversely affect his reputation as well. so for the higher return and maintenance o...
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Line 5, column 690, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...nd maintenance of reputation, he always try to make better idea or policy. if he fo...
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Line 5, column 725, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: If
...ways try to make better idea or policy. if he found any error then he try to elimi...
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Line 5, column 725, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ways try to make better idea or policy. if he found any error then he try to elimi...
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Line 5, column 755, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...r policy. if he found any error then he try to eliminate that error through differe...
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Line 5, column 808, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate that error through different means. however, under certain situation, people...
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Suggestion: However
... however, under certain situation, people who ar...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Individual
...e development of the new plant variety. individual who is not directly involved in the dev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8755186722 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69590222569 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.400414937759 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 777.6 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9198027542 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.904761905 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9523809524 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227888874882 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836660974316 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722437787699 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157366473367 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343489549615 0.0667264976115 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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