The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Leadership is a quality where a leaader job is to drive their followers to success, not to put his agenda ahead. The prompt states that the best way to prepare young people for leadership is by instilling them with sense of cooperation but not with competition, In my opinion, I moderatly agree with this statement and argue that to some extent this statement is true with the following three points.
Firstly, a leader is a person who could take any suggestion given by his followers with ease, for instance, if a leader has some kind of bias towards some followers which could lead ignoring others persons which in turn make many valid or helpful suggestions which benifts the overall organisation to get ignored, this could lead to failure of leadership, so having sense of cooperation would be helpful in such scenarios.
Secondly, competition among people could lead to confilts between them, for instance, a person who competes for something would most likely increase jealousy
and hatred for the others, if a leader has these kinds of qualities in them they would most likely fail, thus having competiton mostly likely lead to failure of leadership.
Lastly, Only having cooperation could lead to problems as some could take this as granted. For instance, Although majority of people could with very friendly and hope goodwill a person, some may take this as an opportunity and misuse his or her leverage, in such conditions having sense of competition and caution could help as with increase in competition trust most likely decreases.
Of course, some may argue that the statement might always be true, however the best and optimal way in my opinion, is having to maintain a balance between sense of cooperation and competition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...estion given by his followers with ease, for instance, if a leader has some kind ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, as to, for instance, kind of, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04137931034 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67547988739 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510344827586 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.956624254 60.3974514979 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 208.857142857 118.986275619 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.4285714286 23.4991977007 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.4285714286 5.21951772744 372% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210998412839 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096003968326 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597363332483 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113783228242 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426566732018 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 14.1392134831 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.1743820225 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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