The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Many people believe that a society will prosper if people are instilled with the feeling of cooperation, and not promote competition while moving move forward in life. They believe, since young people are the future of the world, their young minds should be implanted with values invoking the feeling of cooperation. I, however, would like to respectfully disagree with this notion, as I believe people learn to explore their true potential way more when they are exposed under a competing environment than when they are working in a protective bubble of cooperation.
Various competition and games that many schools and colleges conduct and promote are the obvious examples of how competition elevates a child's potential. Be it getting the highest score in exams, or the winning trophy in an art competition, these competing environments paired with rewards for success encourage children to bring out the best in themselves. These children with their unlocked potential and zeal to outdo themselves are indeed capable of performing excellently in any field in the near future.
While the earlier stage of life - childhood - might appear quite easy, there is no debate in the fact that the real world out there will be full of every sort of people trying to gain opportunity, Let's look at the presidential election of US. The cutthroat election campaign tests the utmost patience and potential of an individual. The opponent candidates are likely to resort to any and every form of action ranging from fake allegations to procuring false data to vilify the opponent, in order to guarantee the win on own's side. Such environment demands the skill of maintaining calm and composure, and still performing excellently which can be attained only if the candidate already has a skill of excelling on a competitive environment. The value of cooperation in such scenario might appear as a naive and unsuccessful attempt at winning.
Similar is the case in the world of industry. We all are quite known about the dog-eat-dog world of industry. The rivalry between Coca-cola and Pepsi dates way back. Only the company that is capable of bringing out the best product with best marketing strategy will succeed in this era. So, a child should know how to excel at his/her respective field by outdoing the rest competitors.
In conclusion, it would be better to raise a child by instilling him/her with the sense of competition. But, he/she should also be taught the importance of healthy competition, and the need to respect the competitors. People should not ignore their ethical responsibility while trying to achieve success. A dirty competition might guarantee the win, but will take the society backward.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...raise a child by instilling him/her with the sense of competition. But, he/she sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, while, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14739229025 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83874742135 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560090702948 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9337968095 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.05 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153404114445 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402477434401 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344835712001 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787662060717 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300853482585 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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