The statement says that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Though this statement appears to be convincing at first instance that the cooperation plays an imperative role in building a society, one must not forget that its through the competition that one gives their best and perform deligently in shaping their career and ultimately leading to a great society.
The education plays a cardinal role in developing and nurturing one's future. There are certain ways through which education is to be instillted to the students in order to get a more desired and successful results. A competition drives a students to give there best in the field they are studying. The plethora is derived from the way they see how other are perfoming and help them motivate to work sedulously in order to surpass them. For instance, the famous Indian cricketer Sachin Tendulkar has become a very successful person in his life. He has indulged the sense of competition in his life to overcome all the difficulties that he was facing and come out to be an eminent person in the society. It's through his assiduous and industrious work that has made him what he is today, though he also factored cooperation while readily working for his goal.
In addition, an individual grows and strive to their goals in a efficient way once he feels that he needs gain immense knowledge in order to surpass others in the competition. This kind of attitude many times helps an individual to lead in their role and come out in way best suited for the society needs. There are several big giant companies like Google, Apple, Microsoft, Amazon etc. All of these companies are able to become successful in their journey through the competition that they faces from their rival companies. This has made them flourish their goals and turn out to be efficient in order to serve the society efficiently.
Although, there are many circumstanes where cooperation is also required along with the competition for an individual to succeed. The reason is that too much of competiton engender a feeling a race to finish in which an individual only thinks about himself and doesn't take into consideration the welfare of the society. For example a renowned businessman Vijay Mallia is under a huge debt from the loan he took from the government in order to flourish his industry and has fled to other country without repaying debt causing a gigantic loss to his own country.
In a sum, though the cooperation is sometimes an essential factor in making an indvidual grow in a best way to serve his society. One must not forget that it's through competition which drives an individual to work deligently and achieve goals for them as well as for society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...rdinal role in developing and nurturing ones future. There are certain ways through ...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...uccessful results. A competition drives a students to give there best in the field they ar...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ividual grows and strive to their goals in a efficient way once he feels that he needs gain immens...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...dual grows and strive to their goals in a efficient way once he feels that he nee...
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Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'face', 'fax'
Suggestion: face; fax
...urney through the competition that they faces from their rival companies. This has ma...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ndividual only thinks about himself and doesnt take into consideration the welfare of ...
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Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...l factor in making an indvidual grow in a best way to serve his society. One must...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8683127572 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73228096613 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4670781893 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2782918301 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.526315789 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5789473684 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293453221176 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995138987854 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180022814861 0.0758088955206 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183341851913 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132304575607 0.0667264976115 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.