The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Who is a leader? What does leadership mean? It helps a person to be a person with so many skills. Yes, it is right. A leader has to have so many skills. Cooperation is one of them. Many will say competition is also important to become a good leader. But it is the cooperation which is the main factor which makes a good leader.
Future leaders come from the young generation. Today's young people are the future leaders. That's why a society has a crucial role to play in making leaders. The best a society can do is that they can prepare the young generations for future leadership. By instilling competition in them is one way. It has some advantages. Competition makes a person perfect for many skills. He or she can learn how to absorb pressure. He or she can learn how to click instantly on time. They can learn how to manage their time. Another learning is how to give the best effort in order to gain something. But it is not the best way to prepare a leader.
On the other hand, the best way to make a leader is to instill in them the sense of cooperation. Doing so will make their various skills perfect. One of the important skill of a leader is communication. The sense of cooperation will enhance this communication skill of a person. The sense of cooperation is something which is based on unity. The power of unity is huge. It also helps to find different ideas from different people. It helps to maintain good relations with others. All the great leaders of the world have a strong and friendly relation with not only their friends but also their enemies.
In a nutshell, we can opine that the best way to prepare young people for leadership is to instill in them a sense of cooperation. It will help to make good future leaders in government, industry, or any other fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n is something which is based on unity. The power of unity is huge. It also helps t...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, as to, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48475609756 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60914163897 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435975609756 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 23.0359550562 43% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5666631226 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.4516129032 118.986275619 40% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5806451613 23.4991977007 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.90322580645 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221543608178 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590015832531 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086651046635 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164740130259 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104587568595 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
automated_readability_index: 5.0 14.1392134831 35% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 48.8420337079 160% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 12.1743820225 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.52 12.1639044944 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 11.8971910112 29% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 11.2143820225 54% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 5.0 11.7820224719 42% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.