The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The future and progress of a society is in the hands of the next generation. The young people are the future face of the society and it is upon the society itself to instill good values in them. The onus of the society's development and progress will certainly be on the shoulders of these young leaders.
In my opinion, the best way to prepare them for future leadership is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation over competition.
We can consider the example of the working environment in an industry. The managers, supervisors are expected to get the work done in the given timeframe from the proletariat. In doing so it is vital that the leadership has amiable relationships with the working class. It is essential that there is cooperation within the leadership and not competition. Competition will lead to the leaders demanding excessively from the workers and not a very good working atmosphere. On the contrary, it will be helpful if cooperation is present within both. People will feel like working and will have a sense of responsibility for completing the required tasks.
While working in organisations like NGO's, it is necessary that there is cooperation within the work group. The primary purpose of the organisation can't be overlooked due to internal competition. This may lead to ignorance in the basic tasks that are required to be carried out.
On the other hand, even competition is essential in some fields. During the poll campaigns, the candidates must have a competitive spirit between them. The candidates are required to fight it out against their opposing parties in order to convince the public about their propogandas and ambitions. Competition is necessary in such cases.
At times, it even helps us to perform better. In schools, the students can have healthy competition between them. This will only help to improve their grades and overall performance.
Hence this being said, cooperation is of utmost important in any field to have healthy relations and required outputs. But, competition is inherent in humans and the basis of improvement in some fields and cannot be completely eliminated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... itself to instill good values in them. The onus of the societys development and pr...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...The primary purpose of the organisation cant be overlooked due to internal competiti...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... their grades and overall performance. Hence this being said, cooperation is of utmo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, so, still, while, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09943181818 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96020955107 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505681818182 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3038088339 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0434782609 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3043478261 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160107123306 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440896011302 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704406251513 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881962132826 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992069940358 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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