This issue raises the controversal topic whether society should prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields by installing them in it, to build the sense of cooperation or competition. However, I pertially agree with the statement.
Leadership is not a easy task. A leader must take decision considering other openion to make a good decision. A good leader should know how his/her juniors think about any thing. Otherwise, things might not work well. For instance, Hitler was very arrogant about his idea and philosophy. He was so ocnfidence that if he attack USSR in worldwar two, he would be victorious, but he did not listen to his generals about coinciquences of attacking USSR. He failed to cooperate with his generals and as a result it was considered that USSR played an important role in destroying Germany.
Teamwork is as important matter. In some cases, teamwork is needed more then individual work. For insstantce, A big company should coordenate each department to produce an expected result. otherwise, it will fail to work.
To run a country, all the departments as well as people in the government should work together. To build this sense, a young person should engage early in the system, to know how it works. If a subordinate does not follow his leader, the system would not work. And, if this happens this in nationwide, a government or company will fall surely.
But, Without compitition, a person will lose his motion to work hard. For instance, if there is no compitition in any sports then, it is more likely that the sports man would not work hard to become champion. Another example, eith the compititive mind and wark work, a person will get what he want and gain the leadership position with his/her hard work.
In Conclution, cooperation is more needed than compitition, but in some cases, compition is needed to build an individual to become more sucsseeful in any field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... with the statement. Leadership is not a easy task. A leader must take decision ...
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Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...ld know how his/her juniors think about any thing. Otherwise, things might not work well....
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... In some cases, teamwork is needed more then individual work. For insstantce, A big ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Otherwise
...partment to produce an expected result. otherwise, it will fail to work. To run a countr...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...nd wark work, a person will get what he want and gain the leadership position with h...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94189602446 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80586330975 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5892424879 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9523809524 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114669562477 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332409511347 0.0831039109588 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701806483986 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764798047912 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110437810482 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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