Modern transportation such as buses, trains, airplanes made our journey easy and comfortable. Nowadays, people can travel wherever they want. Most people want to travel for several reasons such as gaining new experience, better opportunities, explore new culture and so on. Some people like to travel inside their own country and others prefer to travel foreign land for different reasons. But, I think it is better to travel to a foreign country for several reasons.
First, traveling a foreign country will help to gather new experiences. It will help to increase one's knowledge. Besides, it will help to understand the foreign land. For instance, several years ago, I traveled to India: a neighboring country during the Durga Puja: a religious festival of Hindu's. I learned that Puja vastly differs from my country's Puja. There are different customs and rules to celebrate Puja. People their used to dress differently from here. As I was in Kolkata, I was able to see Victoria Park and other museums and from their, I learned how British people used to rule the formal Indian subcontinent. It was a great experience for me. However, if I stayed only in my country, it would not be possible to explore a new culture.
Second, traveling outside will force someone to go out of one's comfort zone. People are used to living a normal boring life nowadays. It is the same work, home, eats, sleeps; the same routine for every day. Traveling outside gives a person new challenges to overcome. For instance, when I visited Nepal, there was a challenge because only a few people know English. So, I started to communicate with local people with sign language and that was very challenging for me. After a few days, a local travel guide taught me some basic local language to communicate with locals. This would not be possible in my country as we speak the same language. Another challenge was when I traveled to Russia. I was never been in snow. But, when I arrived there, it was already snowing there. So, I had to deal with snow and somehow I managed to survive. If I feared about snow and cold, it would not be possible for me to explore Russia.
In Conclusion, It is easy to travel for someone to travel inside one's country but, It is more challenging and exciting to travel outside one's own country as it helps a lot to obtain experience. So, everyone should travel to foreign countries.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. 60
- Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? 70
- Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and 73
- the extended family is less important than it was in the past. 60
- TOEFL T P O 16 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: ONES
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
...w experiences. It will help to increase ones knowledge. Besides, it will help to und...
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: ONES
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
...outside will force someone to go out of ones comfort zone. People are used to living...
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY
Message: Did you mean 'for everyday'?
Suggestion: for everyday
...k, home, eats, sleeps; the same routine for every day. Traveling outside gives a person new c...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7922705314 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61353103485 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502415458937 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3967318834 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1333333333 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03333333333 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292281803881 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764583549078 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723353196436 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202479289957 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529750946395 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.