The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In a society there are many youth which are capable of a leadership. I agree with the argument that we must introduce a sense of coorperation rather than competition with others. Consider the case in our college cricket team our senior is our captain but he treats like his friends always remain calm and cooperate when needed and we are a succesful team. few years back our captain was involved in proving him a superior that time our team was worst in whole state.
Consider the example of a start up founded in my college which now a big food delivering company. They appointed one CEO among them to take the resposibility of the company and it's future. The CEO was a person who was able to make a decisiopn with keeping harmony in team. Once two group were formed in a company on a issue of funding in that case he take the responsibility and resolve the issue by listening to other group. He increase the cooperation among in the team which was splited due to some issue. If he would compete with other group it would have been a heavy loss to the company, it would have splitted.
Another example is of Mr. Singh who is captain of our college cricket team. There is state level competion of volley ball in January 2019 and volley ball team want to participate in it. But our college do not have fund to pay the cost of registration and travelling fee. So, Mr. Singh our captain ask whole team to collect money and give it to volley ball team. So,they can participate in the competition. He cooperated with volley ball team and teh team got 2nd prize which gave award of 20 lakh rupees by which they rapaid our amount with interest. So, for a leader to become a good leader he must cooperate and not compete. He wouldn't cooperate with the other team then it would not be benificial for both.
Whereas, it is not always cooperation is better than competition. To reach the position of a leader you have to compete with your fellow members. To become the captain you have prove your ability and skills which will only develop if you compete with other. The captain of our team is better player than most of the player and his ability to lead is best in our team.
So, the best way toprepare young people for leadership in any field is to introduce them a sense of cooperation. But, one should not forget to teach them that to reach at the position of leadership you first need to compete and prove your ability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun youth seems to be countable; consider using: 'many youths'.
Suggestion: many youths
In a society there are many youth which are capable of a leadership. I ag...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Few
...hen needed and we are a succesful team. few years back our captain was involved in ...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e two group were formed in a company on a issue of funding in that case he take t...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...y on a issue of funding in that case he take the responsibility and resolve the issu...
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Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'increases'.
Suggestion: increases
...e issue by listening to other group. He increase the cooperation among in the team which...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have splitted. Another example is of Mr. Singh who is captain of our college ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...oney and give it to volley ball team. So,they can participate in the competition. He ...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...r he must cooperate and not compete. He wouldnt cooperate with the other team then it w...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it would not be benificial for both. Whereas, it is not always cooperation is better...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'proved', 'proven'.
Suggestion: proved; proven
...members. To become the captain you have prove your ability and skills which will only...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...one should not forget to teach them that to reach at the position of leadership y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46621621622 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4184145212 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468468468468 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4745358554 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.625 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132391242683 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047742229784 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965386176111 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101286141656 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115134046946 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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