The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Henry Ford once said, "Coming together is the beginning. Keeping together is progress. Working together is success." This quote highlights how paramount cooperation is. Competition remains pivotal in many fields as sports for example, but even within sports itself, members of a team have to rely on each other to attain victory. When people work together, they have the opportunity to learn from each other, to realize arduous tasks with minimal efforts and to contribute to social interaction.
Firstly, cooperation is a great teacher. When one works with others, one notices how they perform their duties, and thus one learn from their strengths. In the meantime, they will also incorporate whatever skill you master. For instance, when teachers work collaboratively towards achieving course outcomes or finalizing a project, their combined effort and diverse ideas will positively impact on the final outcome. In other words, a group of twelve teachers is more likely to succeed than a single teacher trying to multi task to prove he is the best.
Secondly, cooperation is time saving. Indeed, some tasks seem insurmountable if one decides to handle them alone. However, when one divides the work load among team members, one could maximize the chance of success and the likelihood of it meeting the deadline constraints. A single person will be overwhelmed by a considerable amount of work and even if he manages to do so, he may not meet the deadline. Therefore, working together as a team renders onerous tasks achievable.
Thirdly, another aspect of working together is that it allows you to interact with others. Some people are shy by nature, so working with others could help them be more social. Besides, many people end up having solid friendships after working together in a project or community service activity. These friendships often live on even after the work is done. People could also work on their interpersonal communication skills based on the daily interactions they have with others.
To conclude, working together is more fulfilling and rewarding; it allows nations as well as individuals to accomplish complex tasks with success. Cooperation is a win-win policy where, provided one does his or her task diligently, everybody could make a difference.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as well as', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214797136038 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.18138424821 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0739856801909 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0787589498807 0.0497285424764 158% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0501193317422 0.0444667217837 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0930787589499 0.12292977631 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0429594272076 0.0406280797675 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86077577631 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334128878282 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00238663484487 0.0016655270985 143% => OK
Determiners: 0.0715990453461 0.0997080785238 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190930787589 0.0249443105267 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0190930787589 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2299.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 366.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28142076503 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409836065574 0.366273622748 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.319672131148 0.280924506359 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20218579235 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128415300546 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86077577631 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 68.9768404119 55.4138127331 124% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.6363636364 23.380412469 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6524919945 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 141.124799967 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 23.380412469 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.674092028746 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 48.6035767511 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.13076923077 1.64882698954 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270150165493 0.391690518653 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0781995062946 0.123202303941 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0679476031067 0.077325440228 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.42649186868 0.547984918172 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129537726649 0.149214159877 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808336557328 0.161403998019 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490646210737 0.0892212321368 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.213591532232 0.385218514788 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0470678531423 0.0692045440612 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156021172635 0.275328986314 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497645744958 0.0653680567796 76% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.