The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

Leadership is a very important quality for improving the socio-economic and other conditions in government, industry or any other field. In most of the parts of the world, young people are being taught the qualities for leadership from the tender age. Cooperation and competition, as stated in the prompt, both of them have some conducive and adverse effects on leadership. While most of the cases cooperation will help a leader to maintain better relationship with his alliances, competition is also needed sometimes to improve personally. So, it is too far to state that the best way to prepare young people as a leader is to teaching them how to be cooperative rather than be competitive.

Leadership in any part of the society or nation requires some basic qualities to be inherited in the person who is in charge. A person who is farsighted, insightful, efficient and energetic is the most suitable person to be a leader. However, in order to be a leader, he needs to have the sense of cooperation too. A sense of helping others in their needs will make them a great person in the eyes of the helped. however, the degree of cooperation varies contingent upon different factors. For instance, a developed country like the United States doesn't need immense help from other countries in order to flourish itself. In stead, the leader of the United States can easily help other developing countries to improve their condition. In this instance, cooperation will lead to the prosperity of the country and their government.

While this is the case of US, this is not true for the developing country like Bangladesh. Bangladesh is a third world developing country with so many problems ahead of them to solve if it wants to shine as a developed country, In this case, if the leader of Bangladesh doesn't have the sense of competition, he will lag behind in the race of getting more help from the developed countries. For example, the Garment sector in Bangladesh is so developed that Bangladesh exports clothing to other developed countries and it is one of the most important source of foreign revenue for Bangladesh. In this example, if Bangladesh doesn't constantly compete with other countries in order to improve their garment qualities, it can never be so much prominent in this field. Only the notion of cooperation will not be beneficial in this instance.

If we think individually, a person can improve his abilities and qualities mostly by comparing with others. If a person wants to become the leader of the country, he must have to compete with other potential candidates. As a result, if he only thinks about being helpful to others and doesn't have the sense of competition in himself, he will not be compatible with others in the race of becoming the leader of the nation.

However, the notion of competition alone can't bring good luck for a government, industry or other field. The youth of a country has to know the proper balance between cooperation and competition. In order to prepare a person for being a leader, a society should teach him or her the proper balance between cooperation and competition. Too much altruism or too much competitive nature, both of them can be harmful in the way of being an effective and proper leader .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, third, while, as to, for example, for instance, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2715.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 554.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90072202166 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8504105873 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.400722021661 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 850.5 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7556519801 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.16 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158743072496 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560436121152 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486418559248 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106613254825 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058003090111 0.0667264976115 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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