The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition.
Cooperation is very essential for the development of any society, thereby being a quality every member of the society, be it the leader or the followers should acquire or possess. It can also be regarded as team work as it entails the contribution of all members involved either in government, industry or any other fields. It benefits a society in various aspects if its members are in cooperation and not competition.
Leadership entails a lot, irrespective of the field, as the leader cannot bear the responsibilities alone. A leader serves his followers to bring about positive development to the society but this cannot be achieved without cooperation from the followers. For a society to be more developed economically or technologically, it must instill in its members a sense of cooperation. The young people must learn to work together with one another as the future of a society lies in the hands of its young ones. There are several medium that can be used to ensure cooperation is achieved in young people such as educational and religious institutions where the young ones are grouped together to carry out an assignment irrespective of the disparity in race or religion.
Furthermore, a society dominated by leaders who join hands together will remain strengthened and peaceful. Cooperation promotes peace among members of a society. For instance, the security of a society is compromised by terrorists or theft cases are rampant, the leader alone cannot proffer a solution on it without carrying the security department of the city along likewise the inhabitants of the society. Several measures must be put in place by the leader and the members of the society to achieve a positive result.
Therefore, preparing the young people for leadership in any field can be achieved by instilling in them a sense of cooperation as it is a vital quality both leaders and followers must observe rather than them competing among themselves. Competition may lead to hatred as each competitor sees the other as a threat to his or her progress.
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition. 50
- Prompt: Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing a field of study in which they are unlikely to study.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing o 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...s it is a vital quality both leaders and followers must observe rather than them ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, may, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0796460177 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06505716162 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495575221239 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9213770584 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322356377753 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107024609386 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837579664519 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199253759 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779821836108 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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