The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Nowadays, young people think that if they compete with each other or if they are ranked first in there class they will be very successful leader in future. But success comes is life when young people understand how to cooperate. Cooperation is a key to becoming a great leader. Leadership skill is generated by cooperation not by competition.

Quality of a good leader is people management and motivator. This quality is achieved by cooperation not by competition. Great leaders manage people in there industry or fields by cooperation between them. We can take an example of a president of a country. Under the president many people work. For example, ministers, social activists, police officers and many other people work under the president. A good president is that one who cooperate with all this people to form a better society to live in. In this current pandemic, there could be dispute between financial minister and health minister but a president is the one who cooperate with both of the ministers to assist both in fighting and winning against this disease. A good leader is also a good motivator. If a motivational speaker don't cooperate with its audience how can he be the best? Managers and CEO of company cooperate and motivates there employers to come up with a big idea. Police chief cooperate with all the police department of various states and hence to motivates them to ensure safety of people.

Human society is formed by cooperation not by competition. We cooperate with our family, friends and relatives in hard times. This is why we are called social animals and this is why we all are humans. Competition causes argument but cooperation collects more support. A good leader is the one who get support from there employers not the one who causes argument in the industry.

However, we all know life is a race and without competition we are not going to be leaders. Competition helps to motivate us to work harder even in the most difficult situation. We can take an example of election. Different candidates fighting to become prime minister or president compete with each other. If they don't compete and don't conduct election campaign it is very unlikely that they will win the election. However, after being elected they should not compete buy rather they should cooperate with different bodies of government that is the attribute of a good leader.

In every field cooperation among leaders and there junior is must. Cooperation helps one is become a best leader in there field. So, young people should be taught to cooperate with each other.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94252873563 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69402729431 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0245619034 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76666666667 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220893956352 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649114280045 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552462356482 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131019180339 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607344802546 0.0667264976115 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments