Young generation of any society is a driving force of a society.The way the young generation is nurtured paves the way for these kids to become better and effective leaders which in turn allows the society on the whole to develop and take collective measures for the betterment of the people within. While cooperation is one the most important aspects for the society to impart to its young generation, I believe other factors such as competition, altruism, respect, judgements also play a pivoting role in the development of the society.We will discuss below how all these factors play a crucial role in the overall development of a society.
One of the most important elements that is recognized for young generation to become better individuals and leaders in cooperation as it leads to a collective effort to solve the problems of the society. It is a known fact that a well cooperated group can outperform the solo acheivers by a factor of 3 times.For example, The Science competition was won by the teams as compared to the individuals in half the allotted time.
A healthy competition is a key factor in the growth of individuals as competition fosters creativity and ingenuinity. A competition from a peer can initiate a desire to surpass the competition and excel in the area of contention. This knack of competition can implicitly develop an individual to find an area of interest and progress further. This interest can help an individual find a vocation. To illustrate, peer competition in graduate schools challenge individuals to outperform and thus inculcate a winning mindset which guides the individual in daily life as well. This innate competitive nature thus helps the individuals perform better in the works of the society on the whole.
Other factors such as mutual respect, unrequited judgements if imparted create a lasting impact in creating a society that is free of such detrimental factors and individuals who exhibit them. For Example, a neighbourhhod in Michigan protected some hooligans to beat a black adoloscent as they understood the effects that this episode can leave on the child.
While cooperation is imperative for young generation to become good leaders , the other factors discussed above also play a crucial role in the development of the individual as a leader. Thus a society should focus on overall development of its young ones bearing in mind all the factors and enable them to become respectable and efficient leaders of tomorrow.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with 58
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also, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11029411765 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02670131426 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460784313725 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9747612779 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.928571429 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19830266813 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713384618777 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462974387312 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116201607032 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488742115366 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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