The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree wi

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

The society, which consists of schools, family, religious bodies and political groups, has a significant role to play in grooming its young for the future, especially in terms of leadership. There are diverse methods employed by these individuals and groups in the training process; some are more inclined to raising young men and women with the spirit of cooperation and brotherhood while others think it best to groom the young with a sense of competition. In my opinion, I am more aligned with the former for two reasons. However, I do concede that there might be a need for youths to possess a

Firstly, a successful leader is one who is able to lead, cope with and manage his/her diverse group of followers. Hence, the young must be adequtely nurtured in thiis light. For example, the 14th president of Uganda championed the transitioning of the state from an underdeveloped country to one with robust techhnological advancements. This occured by fostering tradetrade and partnership with its former rival country Togo. Thus, inculcating a spitit of brotherliness will ultimately lead to the growth and development of the antion

Secondly, a leader with a sense of competition is bound to go any length to achieve a win. An example is seen in the group of individuals referred to as the Talibans in Afghanistan who possess a deep feeling of hatred for individuals outside of their faith. This religious competition led to the death of over 10000 individuals in the space of a month.

However, in certain conditions it might be necessary for youths to be trained as competitors. For example, in sports and talent shows where the prize is awarded to the individual who puts his/her best fit forward, the young should race for themselves and not others

In conclusion, a society will benefit most when its youth are trained to relate as one and not otherwise.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96815286624 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93986823969 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0917625129 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.21951772744 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182463784205 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618945931192 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430296870601 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956524434427 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548237368964 0.0667264976115 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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