The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
Young people are the future of any society and hence nation's and can ameliorate the bad consequences by proper leadership in any fields, government, industry or defense, etc. and hence I believe that society should prepare youngsters for leadership in various fields by instilling them a sense of cooperation rather than competition.
Firstly, to make nation progressive and developed, government plays a vital role. Hence, young people should be prepare for leadership in this field. Government coalesces by a group or groups of people and if they are young then, definitely, they can contribute in building nation's welfare. But it is only possible if there are cooperating with each other. For instance, a group of youngsters who are a part of government and they have to build a bridge, then they have to work by distributing work themselves and everyone should work honestly. If there is competition within themselves then they can't build that bridge efficiently.
Secondly, In industrial sector, to run an industry, again, cooperation plays an important role. For example, a leader of XYZ industry have a good leadership quality and a assiduous workforce then, for sure, he can succeed to run that industry efficiently. But, if there is an competition for a position in industry, it might lead to destruction of an industry as workforce's focus is not on welfare of industry but on the competitors within industry.
Furthermore, leadership quality in young people in fields such as defence sector is directly proportional to the development and national security. If a captain of a military force able to make critical decisions on time then only he can eliminate threat from a country.
Finally, Cooperation is far better than competition in almost all fields and hence society should focus on building leadership qualities in youngsters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26689189189 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0775951564 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6726983407 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.21951772744 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384995510597 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127660862346 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104968698689 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19506280208 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853982745379 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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