The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry ,or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition.

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry ,or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition.

Society plays a crucial role for an individual development of any country's economy, Growth, GDP etc. An effective leadership helps in building strong, adhesive and an important aspect of overall growth of an industry. The prompt states that society should prepare its young people for leadership in government , industry and various other fields by incorporating cooperation instead of competition. I agree with the prompt for the two reasons.

For any individual to become successful there should mutual cooperation between individual to individual. Competition between an individuals should be in an healthy way. We know that today's younger people are tomorrows citizens of a country. A lot of young people learn good and bad from the society.Those who incorporated good ethics, values become successful. The vision of the Society is to prepare an individual for a good leadership in government ,industry and in all other fields. Mutual cooperation is required between individual to individual, government to government , industry to industry. At the same time one should not forget the role an responsibility towards the society.

Competition in any field is good for certain extent but it should not be unethical. Suppose the role of the opposition government is to criticize the ruling party but this do apply only when the government is not doing good for its representatives. Today the politics has become such a mess. This is all because of not having ethical values, morality , not having the will to do good for the society. Another role of the society is to install leadership qualities in young minds instead of work. This plays an important role in becoming a country more strong in terms of power, GDP, economy etc.

Moreover Cooperation is the key for success. By maintaining the mutual cooperation both individuals, firms, organizations gets benefited. Suppose consider the example of vodafone and idea. With the mutual cooperation they are operating network and hence they are under good profits. Instead of maintaining the competition its better to maintain cooperation so that its benefits both companies. Similarly Redbus and GOIBIBO combined together and experiencing good results today.

However some people argue that the there should be competition between the organizations and other sectors. It is good to maintain an healthy competition but it shouldn't be like plotting towards each other. Hence the Society should incorporate its young people for young people for leadership in government , industry and various other fields by incorporating cooperation instead of competition.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, moreover, similarly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47290640394 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0543130289 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458128078818 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8735445004 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4615384615 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327992181737 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971169030742 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124111102058 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214689056796 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944470922295 0.0667264976115 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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