Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should

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Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

Research is the most important aspect to know about anything. Scientific research helps in understanding the facts that are not known. Today if we were able to predict tsunamis, rainfall, temperature any natural calamities etc, is only because of the results of the scientific research. The prompt says that until the consequences are known, government should not fund any scientific research. I disagree with the statement for three reasons.

Research means investigating about the new things. If scientific research is not done it is difficult to survive in the present generation. Edision failed many times before inventing the bulb. If he was not funded then we couldn't have seen the light today. We know that sending a space ship into the universe takes a lot of funding but if the government didn't fund for the scientific research we couldn't land on the moon. Today whatever we are- only because of Scientific research.

In the field of medical, research is an important thing to cure any disease, find medicine etc. Sometimes we might fail but the research helps us in overcoming the flaws or mistakes. Today many operations are performed by robots with absolute precision and success rate. Additionally, new inventions are done from the previous inventions. In most of the cases we might not know the consequences but however if we stop research we can't success. The more research is done the more accurate results are obtained.

Scientific research plays an important role in the feild of communication.Today we are using internet, cellphones,gps, bluetooth etc. All these were invented by Tremendous amount of scientific research and funding. Any scientific research helps in making our lives simple. Although there might be little side effects but we need to consider a lot of advantages.

However few people argue that scientific research leads to many side effects and funding for such type of research is a bad idea. We need to remember that if we stop researching after inventing an aeroplane we could not have improved so much in the field of space and aeronautics. Similarly, if we stopped researching after finding a penciline we could not have advanced so much in the medical field. Hence the government should fund enough for any kind of scientific research.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, similarly, so, then, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91337983029 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2986486212 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.96 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.12 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152148449284 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576750006451 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633242608992 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107018778196 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401802843104 0.0667264976115 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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