the best way for society to prepare its youth for leadership in government ,industry,any other field is by instilling them a sense of cooperation rather than competition. write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree.

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the best way for society to prepare its youth for leadership in government ,industry,any other field is by instilling them a sense of cooperation rather than competition.

write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree.

Youth is the most important factor in increasing the future of the country's economy.

Preparing an individual in shaping his/her ability to work has became crucial need of any field as it might improve their field. Various schemes should be implemented to do such task.While various qualities should be posses by an individual one of the most important is cooperation.

Cooperation among youth is very beneficial in any field. One of the reason being - it helps perform a task more efficiently and smoothly.When there is cooperation among team it will help them do their task in a non chaotic manner. Team spirit is improved when there is cooperation. Hence cooperation is important factor in any field.

Another reason of incorporating the sense of cooperation is that is prevents the superiority factor amongst the youth.Ego is a part of any individual and this gives rise to haughty reponses to another individual -say a team leader to a team member. This might create a hindrance in development of the task. But this can be prevented if there is a cooperative spirit among the team. So this gives another reason to instill cooperation sense in youth.

But along with cooperation there are other skills that should be instilled too.Other skills such as competition,creativeness are also important. Any task could be done more speedily when their is competitive spirit among them. This spirit helps them to create new solution, new ideas more quickly rather then relying on each other for solution. Hence one can develop or invent a solution if there is competitive spirit in him.

So it can be said that cooperation is not the best way to prepare youth for leadership. Other factors should also be taken in consideration before implementing a particular scheme.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, then, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11643835616 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06916089973 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3659777267 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8823529412 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177244270962 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683457882396 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671818338995 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956851403265 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489324513988 0.0667264976115 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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