The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household.
Todays generation considers itself the most advanced, technology equipped and maintaining high standards of living. Everyone showcases to the world that they are living to the best that anyone can by maintaining standards like shopping branded clothes, maintaining high end cars and dining at great restaurants. They keep on taking from their surroundings, however, do they really care for the society at all?
Simple daily habits like household waste is becoming a problem these days. The amount of waste that is collected per day per house is enormous. People continue shedding high amount of waste everyday which keeps on accumulating in the nature.Despite banning by the government, use of plastic has not yet gone down by consumers. heaps of waste collected from towns and cities is causing severe environment problems. Stagnant discarded water outside homes leads to mosquitoe formation that results in harmful illness like flu, typhoid and chikengunea. Small children playing by these ares get affected the most.
Thus the only way that seems to tackle this issue is to impose a restriction on the amount of garbage that will be collected per house, per day. Maybe then people might understand.
The government till date keeps on informing us to not use plastic, to recycle waste, and to take care of the society where we are living in. After all, we cant just be taking from the society! We have to give it back too. The new generation has taken all the available resources for granted and they are depleting them day by day. The question of concern that comes here is, are we really thinking about our next generation?Are we leaving a good environment to even breathe pollution free?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... continue shedding high amount of waste everyday which keeps on accumulating in the natu...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
...ich keeps on accumulating in the nature.Despite banning by the government, use of plast...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Heaps
...tic has not yet gone down by consumers. heaps of waste collected from towns and citie...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...y these ares get affected the most. Thus the only way that seems to tackle this ...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y where we are living in. After all, we cant just be taking from the society! We hav...
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Line 7, column 425, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Are
...ally thinking about our next generation?Are we leaving a good environment to even b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, really, so, then, thus, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 281.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07117437722 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70227468469 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9172077889 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197167415327 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582157178796 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562141469552 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101496480522 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349748657991 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.