the best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
You don't become a king to get acknowledged by everyone. You become king when everyone acknowledge your actions.
This is one of the famous quote said by Mashashi Kishimoto, a Japanese comic writer in one of his manga "Naruto Shippuden".
We are living in a society, in which the entertainment have become the primary source of income. For example, people get
famous by doing anything on the social media irrespective of their content and get viral due to the depleting sense of humour of our world
and making money of that. Even people living in a Which leaves a very negative impression on our upcoming generation. The internet introduced as
the revolution to get access to the any information of the existing world at your home just with a click. But gradually,
it becomes the income source for all the buisiness. And everything on the internet has been covered with the advertisments and stuff.
So, basically these days our society or the people living in it just promoting negative actions irrespective of its outcome to get
entertain and Internet act as a catalyst in it.
The thing need to be understand here, is that we are living in a world, where you will get acknowledged even if your actions
are negative or unhealthy. These things happening due to the lack of teaching to praise the good ideas during the intial states.
The problem is that we are not looking at the source of this thing. We forgot the reason of our existance. We are in a whirpool
of our desires, which one day flush us in the pit of dust through the rough canal of pain.
Our initial step should be start teaching our kids about it. We need to teach our kids the reason of our existance by teaching
them the difference between good and bad. teaching them that Life is not all about the entertainment or fun. Its about
taking responsibility of your action or act responisibly. First we need to taught them, how to be a human by acknowledging their
good acts or actions and teaching them to do take these good and hard decisions in their life also.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ource of income. For example, people get famous by doing anything on the social m...
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...g generation. The internet introduced as the revolution to get access to the any ...
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...r home just with a click. But gradually, it becomes the income source for all the...
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Line 13, column 79, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'praising'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: praising
...s happening due to the lack of teaching to praise the good ideas during the intial states...
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...n of our existance. We are in a whirpool of our desires, which one day flush us i...
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Suggestion: started
...of pain. Our initial step should be start teaching our kids about it. We need to ...
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...how to be a human by acknowledging their good acts or actions and teaching them t...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e good and hard decisions in their life also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7320441989 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7530129511 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2204421054 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.65 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107357920754 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032895521967 0.0831039109588 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381837709063 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0354251022026 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456277748412 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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