Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
As we know that this world slowly drifting towards the era of digitalization. Where every kind of work or activity will be held by computer technology itself. Also, most of the problems or the hurdles we use to face in the past especially in the medical field are now being solved by technology advancement. Though, I partially agree with the statement that one-day science and technology will able to solve all of society's problems. Because there are categories of the problems we face in society. Some are related to the household, some are related to the daily needs and some are related to education and development which in perspective can and can not be solved by technological advancement. Let's discuss some problems which are pertained to our society.
For example, the depletion of natural resources, which is necessary for our day to day life. Water is the most important resource for living and the most important for other aspects too. As we know, gradually the percentage of freshwater is depleting day by day, according to some scientific sources the groundwater level in Maharashtra, INDIA found to be the least in the last 50 years. Which shows the current condition of groundwater state in India. Also, according to them in 2020, there will be no water in Maharashtra-India for drinking and for any other work. This is some kind of problem, which cant be solved by science and technology itself. We need to set the awareness camps and somewhat need to restrain the water consumption for our daily activities, so we can survive the upcoming scarcity in water. This is just one of the problems.
The second example can be air quality. This year in New-Delhi, India, the capital of our country itself counted as the most polluted state in history with the air quality margin of 1000ppm which means this does not just cause pollution, fog or haziness but also certain kinds of diseases. The average pollution level in Delhi in 2015-2017 was 160ppm which is equal to 4 packets of tobacco itself. These kinds of problems are happening because of the increment of industrial set up around the city.
Science and technology are just the resources we can use to counter the problems we face in medical, engineering and research science but as for the depletion of natural resources, we need to plan and make a model counter the basic problems and learn some new practices to fight this problem. And we need to set this on global level, where science can help us to spread awareness all over the world. We need to understand that there is no just one solution for everything, we need to learn to fight with every resource we have and counter these problems as fast as we can. Science is just a resource not a solution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...able to solve all of societys problems. Because there are categories of the problems we...
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...be solved by technological advancement. Lets discuss some problems which are pertain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, as for, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79492600423 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70893914826 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452431289641 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1879662847 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6086956522 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5652173913 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.39130434783 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2353329936 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831472040717 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126162571103 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148287151998 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118050385972 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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