People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The decisions you take while you being in emotional state are mostly wrong. Yes, I am agree to that statement because being in emotional state can make you bias during decision making to some extant, after which it looses all logic behind it. There are lot of great examples in which people have made the decisions in their emotional conscious, which is very wrong. As a Decision maker you should be unbiased, even if its against your will it should be right and fair.
Lets take my life as an example, I have done a lot of mistakes in my life just because of me being emotional. I use to be a stubborn brat, who do thinks as he wants to. I am grow up in a very peaceful environment with a very pampering folks. May be that's why I never cared what is right and what is wrong, I just do what I think is go for me. Life was very kind to me till i hit adulthood, things get ugly day by day because of my choices. But, I didn't know why this is happening to me because it never occurred to me.
I was a kind child but when it comes to think about my life, i was always choose fun and relaxing. Because it keeps me not to think about the life. I want to live in the fairy world, where there is no work, no responsibilities, no worries only fun and fun. Yeah, I was a dumb. Then Like everything have its end fall same for me, gradually, My grades starting to getting down and my overthinking problem is starting to rise up. In intermediate i have scored pretty bad. Somehow, i got selected in Engineering but my poor decision making didn't loose my end my too. I never thought about how future will gonna be. I was just living the present and the past. Which gave me nothing in the end. and now i am just stuck in between in my past and future, where I cant afford to loose any more time. The one thing i have learnt from my past that Respect your future, and the time you have in present.
My poor life decision is indirectly come from my heart because i was scared to accept the reality. And whatever i do i cant expla
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ional state are mostly wrong. Yes, I am agree to that statement because being in emot...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...r will it should be right and fair. Lets take my life as an example, I have done...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e just because of me being emotional. I use to be a stubborn brat, who do thinks as...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...rat, who do thinks as he wants to. I am grow up in a very peaceful environment with ...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'folk'?
Suggestion: folk
...ceful environment with a very pampering folks. May be thats why I never cared what is...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ent with a very pampering folks. May be thats why I never cared what is right and wha...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o for me. Life was very kind to me till i hit adulthood, things get ugly day by d...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ay by day because of my choices. But, I didnt know why this is happening to me becaus...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t when it comes to think about my life, i was always choose fun and relaxing. Bec...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...es to think about my life, i was always choose fun and relaxing. Because it keeps me n...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fun'
Suggestion: to fun
...hink about my life, i was always choose fun and relaxing. Because it keeps me not t...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., i was always choose fun and relaxing. Because it keeps me not to think about the life...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...o worries only fun and fun. Yeah, I was a dumb. Then Like everything have its end fall...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...iate i have scored pretty bad. Somehow, i got selected in Engineering but my poor...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...Engineering but my poor decision making didnt loose my end my too. I never thought ab...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ering but my poor decision making didnt loose my end my too. I never thought about ho...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
.... I never thought about how future will gonna be. I was just living the present and t...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s just living the present and the past. Which gave me nothing in the end. and now i a...
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Suggestion: And
...past. Which gave me nothing in the end. and now i am just stuck in between in my pa...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ich gave me nothing in the end. and now i am just stuck in between in my past and...
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Line 5, column 756, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... between in my past and future, where I cant afford to loose any more time. The one ...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...past and future, where I cant afford to loose any more time. The one thing i have lea...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s indirectly come from my heart because i was scared to accept the reality. And w...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...red to accept the reality. And whatever i do i cant expla
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o accept the reality. And whatever i do i cant expla
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...accept the reality. And whatever i do i cant expla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 33.0505617978 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13197969543 5.05705443957 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33160751844 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522842639594 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6131237855 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8333333333 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141580710831 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395124894129 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646030847493 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104829115464 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886496316036 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 14.1392134831 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 48.8420337079 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 12.1743820225 49% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 12.1639044944 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.38706741573 76% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.7820224719 51% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.