The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
The purpose of teaching is to acquire knowledge for use and growth in life. Both positive and negative actions have direct or indirect consequences that have a domino effect on everything capable of being affected by such actions.
A teacher who praises positive actions while ignoring negative ones is performing a great disservice to society as praising an action and ignoring it both communicates approval for such actions, one method just does it directly while the other indirectly.
Learning is not smooth path. Take a mountain climber toiling and practicing day after day to get to the peak of Mount. Fuji, climbing without the right harness. If such a climber is not corrected, they will ultimately fall to their death.
A common consensus of thought is that no one is perfect. Knowing this, the need then arises for teach to address these imperfections and negative action sothat we can shape ourselves into our best versions. Negative actions need to be addressed so the student can know how their actions affects them, those around them and the society as a whole.
Every action has consequences, that is why none of them should be taken with levity or ignore.
the impact of such actions.
Hence, ignoring negative actions not only reinforces them and causes bigger problems in future.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve ones is performing a great disservice to society as praising an action and ign...
^^
Line 6, column 103, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'addressing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: addressing
...ng this, the need then arises for teach to address these imperfections and negative action...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...should be taken with levity or ignore. the impact of such actions. Hence, ignorin...
^^^
Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...nforces them and causes bigger problems in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 216.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60690493896 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.0228398409 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364124603335 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890382356418 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102158393938 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136939184752 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121807277626 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve ones is performing a great disservice to society as praising an action and ign...
^^
Line 6, column 103, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'addressing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: addressing
...ng this, the need then arises for teach to address these imperfections and negative action...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...should be taken with levity or ignore. the impact of such actions. Hence, ignorin...
^^^
Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...nforces them and causes bigger problems in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 216.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60690493896 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.0228398409 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364124603335 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890382356418 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102158393938 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136939184752 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121807277626 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.