This topic raises the controversial issue whether the best way to understand any society is to examine the men or women that the society chooses as heroes or role models. Indisputably, that there are a lot of criteria to understand any society such as their education system, economic and health sectors. Therefore, I totally disagree that the best way to understand any country by examine its heroes or its role models. Thus, to substantiate my case this essay will elaborate my reasons and examples clearly.
To begin with, it is irrefutable that heroes and role models are crucial part of any society but is not mandatory indicates the actual status of the country. On one hand, heroes and role models, represent part of society and does not reflect all the society. One striking example is the Indian child who is able to multiply large numbers within few seconds does not reflect that all the Indian children are the same or their society in general.
Further, the second vital point that should be taken into account that heroes and roles models have savant abilities and these abilities are very subjective to them. Further illustration requires taking a look at this explanations, the heroes and role modes have abilities to communicate easily such as long negotiation and using varied communication skill such the verbal and non verbal one. Further, they have critical thinking and cognitive flexibility. In deed, taking these samples as representative for the actual status is not plausible. Thus, it is pretty obvious from the all the previous points that we cannot understand any society from their heroes and role models.
Last but not least, to understand any society there are a lot of methods to get your purposes. Such as, using the latest statistics, adopting new research to measure specific data, or observing the general status for the main powers of the country, which I mean, their quality of education, health and how much their economic is prosper. By these ways any one can understand any societies effectively.
In conclusion, due to aforementioned reasons and examples is not plausible to conclude a decision by relying on the heroes and role models because they will hide the actual status, and instead of that they have to do more reliable measures in order to understand any society clearly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, i mean, in conclusion, in general, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03359173127 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67391299568 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503875968992 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1773297948 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261135725684 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965969499315 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101021240008 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14745563336 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937128072015 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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