The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim

The characteristics of a society can never be defined by sole heroes. Society represents millions of people. To generalize characteristics of any society one will have to look for their common general behavior. People live different lives, everyone has had a different day, it completely depends on them how they react to any particular situation. There are several more reasons supporting that one should not judge a society on basis of nature of their role-models or heroes.
To begin with, one man can never represent absolute society. Different bringing up teach unique morals, some by examples some by experiences, but these morals result in people having uncommon habits. Take for an example an army officer who is a war hero, he may be very disciplined and fit, also he may have a habit of drinking alcohol in little quantity every day. This should not be used to generalize that most of the soldiers have the same habits.

Also, it depends on several circumstances that make one, the hero. Heroes are never born, they are made from various decisions they took which resulted in betterment of society. Few role-models may be only whistle blowers while others revolutionary scientists. Similarly, popular sports person and actors are known for their skills. The point is that there is versatility every where, therefore it is wrong to infer that role model's characteristics can define a society's characters. Take for an example, we cannot say that most of the North America behaves the way Mr. Snowden does and uses a blanket to cover their screen while using computers.

Moreover, it is their work that has made them hero not their characteristics. No role-model has ever been known for display of his ideal characteristics. Its not characteristics that make a hero, its their attitude which forces one to not give up on the characteristics that define them. People never support any particular person, they support what that person represents. For instance, if Donald Trump had given up on what he stands for, he might have never gotten elected as president of USA.

However, heroes does define the trends that will be followed. All of us have observed that people tend to follow characteristics of their heroes. Once in while media showcases the personality that these heroes had and inspires the nation to follow on good aspects of these hero's lives. Very frequently you will encounter television shows that recapitulate the determination and good qualities they possessed.

Conclusively, society is a mix of all peoples so should be the way to evaluate it. If one is to judge the nature of any society, he should become a part of it, try to see things the way people in that society see, may be for a small period but it can give very useful insights.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, while, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95708154506 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85519678582 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525751072961 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3605597506 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8461538462 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03846153846 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135560077071 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410036849986 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410422943455 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765712745885 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335452881655 0.0667264976115 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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