The leadership must possess accountability, strategic outlook, innovative thinking, problem-solving capability, decision-making capacity, and integrity. Following traits are important for leadership to become successful. The given statement claims that leadership should step-down after five years for revitalization, and it will lead to success. Revitalization is required for innovation and break-through idea generation, but it is one of the factors required for success. While other factors such as problem-solving ability and strategic thinking are important for a sustainable enhancement of institution.
Firstly, success can be achieved if leadership knows problems in the system. For finding root causes of such problems, leaders must have in-depth knowledge of the subject. In such cases, experience of the leadership plays important role. Additionally, leadership must have knowledge of their available resources and team. Teamwork always makes any task easier. For working with team efficiently, leadership must have experience of working with team. It will help leadership to understand weakness and strength of the team. For instance, soldiers who already fought wars have great war-front experience. Those soldiers already know conditions during the war; therefore, it is not surprising for them. Such soldiers always emerge as great military leaders. Hence experience plays important role in the leadership.
Furthermore, some decisions are made for long term. Such strategic decisions are made for trade, for foreign relations, and for economy. These policies varie leadership to leadership. If the leadership is inclined towards capitalism then these decisions are more industry-friendly. But, if the leadership is oriented towards socialism then the decisions are more friendly towards social welfare. Constant policies in the field of trade, foreign relations, and economy are always helpful for development and long term planning for traders and corporates. Due to the above factors, if leadership is performing good then there is no need to change them.
- Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.Write a response in which you disc 50
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni 50
- Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.Write a response in which you disc 16
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 756, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...lways emerge as great military leaders. Hence experience plays important role in the ...
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...olicies varie leadership to leadership. If the leadership is inclined towards capi...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94333333333 5.05705443957 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23757625393 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556666666667 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3087070615 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5217391304 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0434782609 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.34782608696 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20481721158 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602087132137 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567791044859 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138973665289 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503868144131 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.28 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.